John Has a Sister Who Can See Ghosts?(Ghost Hunt) ON HOLD

Chapter 4: Oh No!

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RECAP: "A Demon." said Rose

--Present--

"Are you sure?" asked Mai. "Positive." said Rose. "John I want you and Mai to face it once and for all. If it knows Rose it wont stop until she has gotten rid of it and John is there for....emontionaly support. said Naru. "Okay I will stand up to it." said Rose. Her and John walked to the room where it was at. She sensed it was near. "Welcome back Rose." said the voice but it was useing her Dad's voice. "I-I uh." Rose froze. "Go ahead." said John.

"I want you out now." said Rose. "Hahaha yeah right. You want me gone thats exactly what your parents said when I got in their car and made them crash." said The Demon(Im putting demon now instead of voice). "W-what?" stuttered Rose. Then she froze again. "Tell you what tell me to leave and I will." said The Demon. "I-I." Rose couldn't continue she was shooken up. This Demon killed her parents.

"Haha did I struck a nerve." said The Demon in her Dad's voice. "STOP!" yelled John and splashed holy water on it. "GRRR YOU'LL PAY!!!" yelled The Demon and it threw John across the floor. John hit his head and fell to the floor.

"JOHN!" yelled Monk. "Rose are you okay?" asked Mai. Rose stood there in shock. Monk and Naru were handeling the Demon. Mai brought Rose to Lin in the camera room. "M-mai." said Rose. "Rose you okay?" asked Lin. All Rose did was nod.

*One Hour Later

Monk and Naru came in saying the job was done, but where was John? "Where's John?" asked Mai. "John!" yelled Rose and ran out of the room to find an unconsious John lying on the floor.

"NO!!" yelled Rose with tears in her eyes. "Wake up John, WAKE UP!!!" "JOHN!" everyone else yelled. "We need to take him to a hospital." said Lin and him and Naru carried John out of the building and drove to the hospital with Rose, Mai and Monk following in Monk's car.

---At the hospital---

"Rose relax." said Mai who was trying to comfort her. "I can't this was all my fault." said Rose. "If I didn't freeze up John wouldn't be here." cried Rose. "No, Its not your fault. It killed your parents anyone would have frozen." said Naru. The doctor came out. "I need to speak to John's parents." said The Doctor (Doctor Who XP)

"Our parents died, I'm his sister." said Rose. "Right follow me to his room and I will tell you whats happening." said The Doctor.

"Okay so here's whats going on. Mr. Brown has been in surgery he broke his arm falling on the ground. Also it has come to my attention that he has fallen in a coma. Its called a dream coma where there mind has flashback from when they were younger. Everyone has heard the expression life flashed before there eyes. Well this is kind of like it but he will experience sad memories and when he went threw hard times."

"Oh........When will he wake up." said Rose trying to keep calm. "Were not sure, but try talking to him maybe it will snap him out of it if he hears your voice and tries to follow it, here is his room." said The Doctor as he walked away.

---Walking in the room---

"...John..." whispered Rose seeing him lying on the bed. Rose ran over to him and sat next to him. Rose held his hand and said. "I don't know if you can hear me or not but I'm SO sorry *starting to tear up* this is all my fault. *chuckles sad* I bet if you can speak you'd say its not my fault. This time it is."

" Mai is going to get you some supplies for you to sleep here with John." said Naru. "Thank you." mumbled Rose. " *sighs* Its not your fault. I mean yes you could have maybe prevented it, but I believe its not your fault." said Naru. Rose looked up surprised to hear this from Naru... NARU!!

"T-thank you." said Rose and she went to him and hugged him. Naru slightly blushed but held it back. "Get some sleep." said Naru and then he walked out.

---Rose POV---

'This is ALL my fault. I'm so sorry' "Good night John." I said. Before I let darkness consume me my last thought was 'John forgive me.' Then I fell asleep.

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Sorry the chapters arent long. I'm still new at this whole writing stories. But my friend is great with it so she will help edit these and make them better.