To find my sister

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I turn on the bath tub as hot as it goes, stick the note to the mirror and turn off the bath.

I'm fully clothed and ready for what's about to happen. I breath in and out then go under,
1..2..3..4..5..6..
19..20..21.. Then I can't feel anything anymore.

Taylors P.O.V.
Madie runs out to tell me she's taking a bath and don't bother her.
I get very suspicious because that's what she told me the last time.
----------30 minutes later------
I haven't herd the bath water drain so I get up to check on Madie. I knock on the door no response so I knock again still no response so I go down the hallway to find a shelf with a few pictures on it and get the bathroom key from behind it. I quickly run back to Madie's bathroom thinking the worst possible i struggle with the key before putting it into the lock once I open it I find Madie sitting in the bathtub fully clothed underwater looking lifeless.

I spring back to my room to grab my phone I search but I can't find it so I go downstairs searching for the house phone I finally find it then run back up upstairs i dial 911 then put it on speaker on the sink counter so I can help Madie out of the tub.

"Hello this is 911 what is your emergency?"

"Hi I'm Taylor Cruz and my sister needs help she has attempted to commit suicide but I think I can still feel her pulse I think just get someone over here hurry!!"

"Okay Taylor what is your address?"

"1423 Wilson road"

"Okay someone is on their way Taylor"

"Okay thank you"

"No problem honey"

*end of phone call*

Oh ya i forgot to tell my name is Taylor Cruz and I live with my sister Madie and my dad Henry, out dad doesn't like that he's a single father taking care of 2 teenagers so he took a travel business job so he could 'see the world and try to forget about our mother' but I know it's because he wants to get away from us. We're a little wealthy but me and Madie aren't stuck up, we have our own jobs that our dad doesn't know about to take care of our personal needs he only ever buys food and what he needs and whatever our dog needs (Bruce is his name). Oh my mother you might be wondering what happened to her? Well she left when me and Madie were 12 (Madie) and 13 (me) because she couldn't handle us growing up so she left and our father makes sure to remind us that it's our fault whenever he feels lonely. So I think that's pretty much what you need to know about us so far.

The ambulance finally arrives and soon after a cop car pulls up. Let's just say it was chaos and before I knew it I was riding in the back of the ambulance holding my sisters hand praying for her to breath on her own.
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About an hour or so later I saw her eyes flutter open she started to have a panic attack so I ran to get the nurse and she quickly rushed back to find my sister gone tubes detached and her shoes gone.

CLIFF HANGER WHOOOO
Im updating tomorrow don't worry :)

I know it's not perfect but deal with it❤️

~Madie Zimmer🌹

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