Jeneisha's Book Reviews (CLOSED)

27. Rich to Filth

Author: _Queen_Ai_

Title: Rich to Filth

Firstly, we'd like to apologize for taking this long to publish your review. 

Title 5/5

The title is interesting and attention grabbing. 

Cover 4/5

I don't really like the font that you used; it doesn't go well with the background and the picture. 

Description 8/10

There are a few errors in the description, but otherwise it was good. 

Character Development 8/10

I like the fact that we instantly got a personality for Daisy and because of how developed it is, I'm sure that somewhere along the line when she is less bitter and more adaptable to her situation, her character will wow the readers. 

Spelling and Grammar 7/10

I've spotted a few redundancies, for example:

Let's go to the beginning where it all began, shall we... 

To reduce the redundancy, you can eliminate 'where it all began' from the sentence. 

Plot 8/10

The whole rich girl to poor girl plot is very common; I've read a lot of books and watched movies with the same plot line. However, you executed it well. Maybe you could've added some more details about how Daisy's dad ended up losing the money amongst other things.

Overall Review 

* I love the humor, it really compels me to keep reading. Good job!

Reviewer 

lil_jessi

***

Title 5/5Short and intriguing

Cover 3/5

I love the fact that you included a girl with money on the cover. However, I think you stretched the image too much. Along with that, the font doesn't match.

Description 7/10

Love the description. However, I suggest that you remove everything from "she must deal with regular public school" to "clash heads", then join the two paragraphs to to make one. Besides that, the description is good.

Character Development 8/10

I love how you started it out. Apparently the girl is rich, and most rich people are bossy, mean and stuck-up. All of that was shown in Daisy. You need to add some environmental description though.

Spelling and Grammar 7/10

Your spelling is fine. Punctuations seem fine too but you have a few missing words in some areas.
In the first chapter for example:
"Laid out poolside" should be "laid by the poolside".

Plot 10/10

Plot is going great so far. Keep it up.

Overall Review

Good job!

Reviewer 

Hiz_Secret_Addiction