chapter 1: should I tell him/her

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Here is the first part of my story. A little reminder is this is my first time writing a story, so I may not be good at it. But I would like you to try it anyway.

It was late at night, the chipmunks and the chipettes are all getting ready for bed. But Simon, Theodore, Jeanette, and Eleanor noticed that Alvin and Brittany have been acting strange, they hardly acted this way, but now they do it every time there together. Simon and Theodore knew that Alvin has feelings for Brittany, same with Jeanette and Eleanor for Brittany. But they are to scared to tell each other, so they try to help them out.

"Hey Alvin, we need to talk before we go to bed." said Simon in as serious voice

"What about" asked Alvin in a confused voice

"We noticed you are acting strange when you are with Brittany" said Theodore

Alvin upon hearing Brittany name he started to blush

"we know you have some feelings for Brittany" said Simon

Alvin with a shocked look on his face "what are you talking about" he said in a confused voice

"Don't try to hid it Alvin. We know you love Brittany" Theodore said in a serious voice

Then after a few seconds, Alvin decided to give in

"Alright you are right.....I do love Brittany....with all my heart" said Alvin in a happy and sad voice

"So are going to tell Brittany about your feelings" asked Theodore

"I don't know.....I don't think Brittany even likes me that way" Alvin answered in a sad voice

"you wont know if you don't tell her, and anyway you can get it off your chest" Simon said

"I know you two are trying to help me....but can you please leave me alone....I have to think this over" Alvin said in a serious and caring voice

"OK" Simon and Theodore say at the same time

With that they turned off the lights and the three brothers went to bed. Meanwhile at the Chipettes treehouse, similar things were happening.

"Um Brittany are you feeling ok" asked Eleanor in a caring voice

"Yes I am fine, why do you ask" answered Brittany confused

"You are acting different when Alvin is with you" replied Jeanette

There was a small silence with Brittany blushing

"We know you have some feelings for Alvin" Jeanette said in a caring voice

Brittany with out arguing decided to tell them "Ok I have feelings for Alvin....he is just so handsome" Brittany said while daydreaming about her and Alvin

Jeanette and Eleanor have shocked looks on their faces "When did you start having feelings" Eleanor asked

"For like a month or two" Brittany said with a sigh

"So are you going to tell Alvin" Jeanette asked

"I don't Alvin is falling for me" Brittany said in a sad voice

You could tell him to get off your chest" Eleanor said with some confidence

Brittany then looked down with some tears in her eyes "I just don't want Alvin to think that I could be silly for loving him" Brittany said while crying

Eleanor and Jeanette then went to Brittany and gave her a hug making her feel a little better. Just when Eleanor was about to speak Brittany beat her to it

"Thank for the hug, but if you girls don't mind I need to think about all this" Brittany said in a kind and sorta sad voice

"ok" said Jeanette and Eleanor

Then with that they turned off the lights and went to sleep, but Brittany waited a few seconds think of Alvin "oh Alvin how can I tell you I love you" Brittany said in thought. Then Brittany close her eyes and went into dreamland.


So what do you think of part 1. Do you think Alvin and Brittany will get the confidence to tell each other. Let me know and keep reading to find out.

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