Round 199 - September 5 - 11, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, September 5 – Saturday, September 11, 2021, 11:59 P.M. PST

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: SapphireAlena

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Check out our new reviewing options! Need a beta read instead of a meta analysis? How about a light edit? Have an ONC that needs the special Wayfarer's touch? Check out the options in the new chapters of this book.

Check out our new reviewing options! Need a beta read instead of a meta analysis? How about a light edit? Have an ONC that needs the special Wayfarer's touch? Check out the options in the new chapters of this book

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COMMENT TOPIC: Scene building/world construction is the backbone of any story but it can be difficult for writers to strike a balance. Were you transported to 'that time or place'? Point out where the authors may have been under or over descriptive and suggest any possible improvements. Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

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