Round 212 - December 12- December 18, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, December 12 – Saturday, December 18, 2021, 11:59 P.M. PST

ANNOUNCEMENT: The book club will be on holiday break from Sunday, December 19 - Saturday, January 1

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ANNOUNCEMENT: The book club will be on holiday break from Sunday, December 19 - Saturday, January 1. We will return with round 213 on January 2, 2022.

 We will return with round 213 on January 2, 2022

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ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja

COMMENT TOPIC: Transitions connect sentences, paragraphs, and chapters to improve the story's flow. Does the writer use carefully chosen transitions to help the reader along? Did you identify places in the story where well-placed transitions may have helped the story move more gracefully? Min. length: 6 sentences. Please post in the last chapter of this week's assignment.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

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