Round 204 - October 10 - October 16, 2021

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COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, October 10 - Saturday, October 16, 2021, 11:59 P.M. PDT

ROUND ADMINISTRATOR: AmericanBruja

COMMENT TOPIC: Identify the Mini-Plot of the chapter and describe how the writer can make it bolder—more juicier

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COMMENT TOPIC: Identify the Mini-Plot of the chapter and describe how the writer can make it bolder—more juicier. Be specific. Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

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META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]


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