Concerning My Aphmau Books!
After re-reading the cringe, that is my Aphmau book, "The Race" I think I'm going to just re-write it instead of editing the book. The original will still be up, but I'm just wondering if anyone would read the re-write.
Things would be added, but nothing taken out. There would be better writing of plot and dialog along with mini plots. I'd try to make some of the shorter chapters longer and less cringe.
I feel that "Heartfelt" is pretty much perfect. But I'd probably drag out the plot a little longer, as I feel that I rushed it! I might add stuff in-between the last two chapters, maybe put the story ideas I've been working on for my book titled, "Heartfelt Mini Stories" in just the regular Heartfelt book.
Thanks to those of you who have read this whole thing out! Because I am definitely feeling up to writing on a constant basis!
Please let me know what you think! And any feedback would help loads!
YOU ARE READING
The Race (Check out the rewrite)
FanfictionDisclaimer: This book was made 4 years before the announcement for the final season of Mystreet in 2025. My book finally serves no purpose!! But because of that, literally all of this book is just for fun. And literally, honestly, didn't cover the s...
