The Race (Check out the rewrite)

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It was nice outside. The sky was clear and it was quite warm.

Garroth was standing in the sunlight. It felt nice. Laurance was still asleep.

Garroth wondered what Laurence had been doing when he had gone to the store in town.

He looked out at the forest and saw something move.

"Hello?" He called. "Who's there?"

Some leaves rustled. "Hello?" Garroth called again. Nothing came out. Garroth walked towards the bushes.

"Come on out. I don't want to hurt you." He said, picking up a big stick.

Suddenly a figure in a red cloak popped up out of the bushes. Garroth immediately recognized her.

"Tatiana?" He said in surprise.

"Hey Garroth." She replied. "Were you always a werewolf?"

"Ah, no. It's a long story." He said. "What are you doing. How's your pack?"

"They're good. Just out hunting."

"Cool. Why don't you come inside?" Garroth offered.

"Ok. Thanks."

They turned and went to the front door.

"So, what you doing here?" Tatiana asked.

"Some stuff happened at home. It wasn't very good." Garroth said.

"Give me the low down." She said.

Garroth stopped and told her everything that happened after leaving the lodge up until that point.

"Oh, I'm so sorry. I should have made sure my pack had finished him off." Tatiana apologized.

"It's not your fault." Garroth reassured her.

"You said that your friend had gone off to do something when you were gone yesterday right?" She asked.

"Ya, why?" Garroth wondered.

"Well, I live in the cabin and I've been learning potions. And yesterday some one came in while I was gone. I came back and noticed the door was open. So I used an invisibility potion and went in. He ran away. I tried to stop him, but he got away." Tatiana said. "I think it might have been your friend."

"Could be possible." Garroth said.

"I didn't know that anyone was here so I came to investigate. I didn't recognize you due to your ears and tail."

"It's fine. Don't worry about it."

They opened the front door and went inside. Laurance was on the lobby couch.

"Hey Laurence." Garroth said.

"Hey Garroth, I was wondering where you were. Who's the girl?" Laurance wondered.

"I'm Tatiana." Tatiana said.

"Well it's nice to meet you." Laurence said.

"Want something to eat Tatiana." Garroth offered.

"Sure." Tatiana accepted.

Garroth and Tatiana went to the cafeteria. When they got there Garroth went to go make some eggs.

"Your friend was definitely the one that went into the cabin." Tatiana confirmed.

"Do you have any idea why he went there?" Garroth asked.

"Mostly out of curiosity I guessing."

"Ok then. You should come help me with the food."

"Ok."