🦚POETRY RESULTS (3)🦚

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Hi you'll here are the poetry results and everyone-

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Hi you'll here are the poetry results and everyone-

My mind:
Dude get to the point and announce the results already! Why write this and that
Me:
Yes- but-
My mind:
Ugh do it!
Me:
All right

My mind: Dude get to the point and announce the results already! Why write this and thatMe: Yes- but-My mind: Ugh do it!Me:All right

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1st Position🥇

hermiosa_reina Bosom Pals

Judging:

Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15
Writing style- 14 /15
Poetic devices- 15 /15
Emotions- 9.5/10
Originality- 10/10
Enjoyment- 10 /10
Total: 96.5/100

Reviews: Gurl You nailed it! That’s the thing I have to say after reading
I would say, your feelings could be seen in your piece.
You had a good number of poetic devices, and the metaphors, the similes were so very well used.
The length was good, the flow was amazing, I was genuinely enjoying it. Like, I feel you expressed
death very well through the poetry. You described death so perfectly and was worth reading it.
Overall I would say, beautifully written down, the rhythm was good and the emotions were very
touching. Good Work, All the Best for the future.
You are one of my favourites gurl!
Amazing work.

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2nd Position🥈

As_I_Write A voice from the heart

Judging:

Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14/15
Writing style- 14 /15
Poetic devices- 14.5 /15
Emotions- 9/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 10 /10
Total: 93.5/100

Reviews: Beautifully Written, but there are some improvements required.
I mean, you lost your flow in some places. But, believe me, it was amazing, the way you started, it
grabbed my attention, it was amazing and worth reading.
I honestly love poetry, where there are a lot of poetic devices, and your’s was the one. Your feelings
were amazing and beautifully expressed.
I loved it!
Overall beautifully penned down, the rhythm was good and the emotions were very touching.
Good Work, All the Best for the future.

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