I'm not very happy with the chapter, but I wanted to have the movie connected to the story. I tried to just run through it, which I apologize for if anyone was hoping for a really long chapter including all the details of the movie. I do love all the movies, I just wanted to get through them fast so I could focus on the story of Anelra and Ahkmenrah more. If people ask, I will make the next movie more involved if I can. I am working at making the chapters longer, but I'm also trying to keep the suspense like most books do. I kinda need help. I need to know if I'm going in a good direction, if I need to make any changes, if I need to change my style, or make anything clearer. Thanks! Also, I do have other chapters written, but I don't want to publish them faster than I can write them. When I have time or just decide I should do an update, I will. Thanks!
~R
