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Why is she hated:
Like Chris, she's a spoiled little princess, but unlike Chris, she's the daughter of the President.
She always throws a hissy fit at the simplest things, and uses her charms to get what she wants and will make a tantrum when things don't go her way.Oh, and the clothings: It's WAY too revealing! I mean, look! It's too much! And her wedding dress? It looks more like an undergarment to me!
Okay, now that's outta the way, rewrite:Backstory:
Princess Sara Ovalain is the half-cat daughter of the President Neil Ovalain, born from her half-cat mother, who's fate is unknown. Neil wanted only the best for his daughter, so he was a fair president and would always spoil Sara, while dr. Robotnik always kidnapped and used her as bait, much to Neils's worry and annoyance, so he tried to teach her about the responsibility of being a president and the ability to defend herself for many years, but much to his worry, she was never able to take her responsibilities seriously.When she was 18, both she and her father suffered a car accident because she got distracted by horrible things that were happening in the roads. That caused her to not looking where she was driving, and Neil used himself as a human shield to protect her from the worst of it, leading her with a bad cut in the leg and him in a comatose, along with a man and his child to be mortally injured.
In grief, Sara would constantly blame herself for what happened and she threw a tantrum that left her room in ruins. Although she had enough money for the man and child's treatment, she knew that her father might never wake up. A few weeks later, she found portfolios of a project that Neil was secretly doing, and it turned out that the project is intended to make the city safer and help the poor people in the street. She then remembered something that Neil said before the accident:
"Dear Sara, promise me that you'll become a great president, who unlike me, is always brave in the face of danger no matter what."From that day onward, she worked extra hard on everything, took lots of meetings and paid attention to all of she could, and would spend hours completing paperwork and approving/disapproving contracts and discuss of Eggman's attacks with the other leaders, and she eventually graduated, while coincidentally her graduation was also when she became the official president of the City of the Sky.
One day, Neil woke up from coma, the nurse told him on how the city was even better and safer than it ever was before, and he signed up a meeting in her office, for him to see the responsible and brave president she become, and when Sara saw him when she turned around, she bursted into tears of joy and hugged him incredibly tightly, making it officially the happiest day of her life.
Personality:
Sara is a spoiled and loud bratty girl who has matured a lot from here and there, becoming a fair and respectful president who takes her job very seriously. She's very brave, unlike her father, she shows it when Robotnik held her and the other leaders captive in the robolympics, she didn't even flinch when he threatened her life, stating that she doesn't care what he does to her, and putting the lives of others before herself, which also shows that she became an altruistic president.Unlike Chris, she became a workaholic, taking her job quite too seriously, which was the reason that Neil took her to the Robolympics, as he stated, to take a well-earned break.
She's still a damsel in distress with an attitude who will not stand around waiting to be rescued, can very well fight and will not one bit afraid to scratch you.
She also grown interest with Elise Von Asterius the III, princess of Soleanna, because like her, she puts her kingdom and citizens before her, despite how they treat her in fear.
She also kept her soft side, always trying to support her friends in anytime she can.
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Sonic characters rewrite
RastgeleThis story is gonna be a rewrite of hated Sonic characters for my project. What else? Don't be afraid to type down which character you want me to rewrite.