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Sedgepaw

                          Thank you stuffshadow for submitting this one of a kind OC!

Note: This is a WIP, the backstory is unfinished.

Fair enough, we all have our OCs like this. I know I do.

Name: Sedgepaw

Previous + future names: Sedgekit, Sedgefern

Name reasoning: Sedge simply because her mother liked sedges, and fern because she is very intelligent, and it also represents her growth over time.

4.3/5. The name Sedge is very overused which makes it not as interesting to see as it once was. I would go for another plant name that you don't see often like. . . Aster, Daffodil, Peony. These are just a few names I never really see out there, peony is one I never.

Gender: She-cat

Age: 6 moons (currently)

Sexuality: Aroace

Good for a medicine cat!

Clan: NeedleClan, they live in a pine forest and value intelligence and hard work the most. NeedleClan cats are very practical, and are quick to make decisions, but also don't adapt to change very well. NeedleClan cats can also be stubborn, and incredibly impatient when things don't go their way. NeedleClan is feared during battle not because of their strength, but more due to their intelligence and strategy. NeedleClan cats hunt mice, voles, birds, and red squirrels. Predators include foxes, stoats, and rarely wolves or snakes.

I really love the sound of Needleclan! I'm guessing they're named for the Pine needles? Lots of flaws about the clans main personality so I would add some good history to the clan too just to make it a bit more interesting.

Rank: Medicine cat apprentice (later medicine cat)

Reason of death: Undecided

?/5. Alright that's fine! Understandable since she's so young, but make it something interesting. If she has a apprentice in the future perhaps they feed her deathberries while she is half asleep, or a wolf raid. . . a bit cliche but most MC don't die from a animal raid.    

Appearance: A gray and white tuxedo cat with a mask and mantle pattern. She has hazel eyes, short fur, and small ears. She has a small build, is a bit chubby, and has legs a bit shorter than normal.

10/10! Very realistic! You don't see many tuxedo she-cats so it's rather adorable. It would make her even better if she got a bit chubby by sneaking prey.

Personality: Sedgepaw is lazy, spoiled, and unmotivated. She isn't willing to work hard and expects others to do everything for her, and often takes the easy way out of things. She easily finds cats annoying, dislikes kits, and is an introvert. However, she has a soft spot for elders, especially since her grandmother is one. Sedgepaw is quite intelligent and has a good memory for her age, but her intelligence is often not taken seriously because of her laziness and apathy. As she grows older, she becomes more caring and responsible. While she retains some of her laziness, she now takes her job as a medicine cat seriously and cares about helping other cats more.

7/10. Very cliche let me tell you. Even though she gets better and you retained OK balance in this, but I've seen this so many times! Give her more. . . good personality traits as a younger cat. Perhaps make her happy around other clans because she feels more welcome meeting cats, or having her help train kits in hopes they will stop bothering her but she hides the fact she starts to love them.

Mother: Shellstream, a stocky short furred gray she-cat with darker gray spots, and light green eyes. Shellstream is feisty, arrogant, energetic, but was quite bratty and entitled when she was younger. She died when Sedgekit was only a moon old, so Sedgekit doesn't remember her that well (I know this is cliche sry)