The Aesthetics need editing.
Male LeadsHassan Malik (Age 25): A business man, recently started handling his dad's business with him. An energetic and outgoing person.
"Aap mujhay itna ghatya samajhti hain? Uff khudaya main margaya kiu nahi gaya ye sunne se pehle."
"I don't want to end this relation , aap mjhy achi lagti hain."
"Jab aapne kch ghalt ni kia toh Maamla Allah pe chorden. Uske har kaam me behtari hoti hai."
"Apko nahi chorna chahta. Trust kijiyega ek bar, InshAllah kabhi tootne nai dunga."
"Ye? Ye mere bhai ki behen hai."
Dr.Ayaan Khan (Age 33): A doctor by profession. Single Father of two cute daughters, who mean the world to him. Scarred. Reserved & Introvert, but cool and calm. Loved his ex wife dearly.
--Too Introvert that I don't even have his dialogues to write at the moment. Let's wait until the story ends--
"Meeru, baba se kia gift lena hai?"
"Idhar do meri beti, meray pass toh ati hi nahi hai sara din tatu tatu."
"Baba ki jaan, now I'll be there to pick you up even before you fall."
"My daughter looks like a princess."
"Baba ki jaan I am sorry. Why did I not take care of you when I was supposed to?"
"I could not protect my daughter."
"Baba ki jaaan."
YOU ARE READING
Gurya (Doll)
RomanceNot mature. Rated it to prevent it being posted on teen sites. Cringy unedited first draft that I, as the writer, don't have the heart to read again. I cannot edit it, too busy, so I keep writing ahead. Read at your own risk and responsibility, know...