I need some help, I have a crush on someone so I wrote this poem, can you tell me if it's good or not, I want to be as good as it can be so I can read it to him. Just give your thoughts on it and tell me anything about the poem that I can make better!
"People say that true love is like a never-ending river or as pure as gold, or even like the smell of the sweetest flowers.
But soon enough the rivers will dry up,
The pure gold was originally fool's gold,
And flowers eventually start to wilt.
The "true love" people want to believe in isn't always what it seems.
And the fairy tale stories about a true love's kiss is a lie,
Because you love them to the point where you would do anything for them, doesn't mean that they like you back.
Love is when you like a person even when nobody else likes them,
Love is making up for arguments over something you know was wrong,
Love is seeing past the cracks of a broken soul and seeing more than they'll ever see of themselves,
Love is accepting them no matter who they are and what they do for a living,
Love is helping each other understand one another and go forward in life together.
Though I'm not innocent and my heart isn't pure and is crucially cracked to a point of no return. And I'm not perfect and I'm depressed and have self-hate. I don't like catching feelings but this time I can't hold it in any longer."
So wait do y'all think?
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