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🎊🎉Results: Short Story🎉🎊

"Finally, the winners are announced and so are methods to improve!"

The long awaited results for the short stories genre is here! Firstly, a huge round of applause and a namaste to the judges, beingmyself06, feechi17 and hooWoman for spending their valuable time to judge the entries! Thank you! Secondly, Ilakshi and I would like to thank all the participants who took part!

There will be an honourable mention only for this genre as we did not want the participant to be left out.

Please respect the decisions and reviews of the judges! Do NOT blame them and bully them. If news of such irresponsible behavior reaches our ears, you will be reported without a second thought.

Let's continue to the scores!

✒Dragon: Myth of the Bermuda Triangle (Novella #1)✓ by CroodsGirl

Cover (4/5) There is a question mark missing after "What is the secret of the Bermuda Triangle"
Blurb(5/5)
Title(5/5)
Creativity (5/5)
Chapters:
3/5 for personal enjoyment
Some parts were hard for me to understand but the authors way of describing the events is good.
5/5 for punctuation and paragraph
Grammar (4/5) The author should have used 'you' instead of 'ya', other than that there is negligible mistake.
Preciseness (2/3) The story doesn't stick much to its genre.
Character development (2/2)

Total: 35/40

✒You Idiot, why you had die on me by xFall3nang3lx,

Cover: 3/5
Because the authors name is not there and the title is not clear. Also the font size of "me" in the title should be increased. But it's beautiful and has a suitable background.
Blurb: 2/5
The blurb is good but kind of gives away the story. The author should explain it in a way that hooks the reader.
Title: 4/5
It's unique and does catch attention but is not precise.
Creativity: 3/5
The story is good, but not that creative though because it's quite predictable what happens next.
Chapters:
Personal enjoyment: 3/5
It's fast paced and some reasons remain unexplained like why was the character behaving different after 5 years? Some parts are hard to understand. But the author's writing style is good and makes the story interesting...
Punctuation and Paragraph: 2/5
It was not good. Punctuation was missing in a lot of places. There were places where the expressions made by the character were not clear. The paragraphs were not divided accordingly.
Grammar:3/5
The grammar was not that good. There were capitalisation errors but the spelling was good.
Preciseness: 3/3
The book pretty much sticks to the genre. The story is well plotted.
Character development: 1/2
It is good. The way the author had portrayed the problems faced by the character, while being in a relationship is pretty much relatable.
Only some aspects of the characters needs to be explained a bit more.