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"Finally, the winners are announced and so are methods to improve!"
The long awaited results for the short stories genre is here! Firstly, a huge round of applause and a namaste to the judge, conquestofthesomnium for spending her valuable time to judge the entries! Thank you! Secondly, Ilakshi and I would like to thank all the participants who took part!
Please respect the decisions and reviews of the judges! Do NOT blame them and bully them. If news of such irresponsible behavior reaches our ears, you will be reported without a second thought.
Let's continue to the scores!
•Book: Honey Tears || a poetry collection by ABCDEFGH10_1
*cover (3)
- a readable author’s name, readable title, nice background. but as appealing as the cover may be, it lacks connection to even just the title of the book. why is there a dove? how does that connect to the theme of the poems? yes, it may be poetic but you still have to provide clear connection. you have the skill to improve, so work on it.
*title (4)
- an apt title for a poetry collection. poetic in every essence. i could also say that honey tears is an allegory to something else. so, good job.
*creativity (4)
- the cries you ignore: it’s not all the time that i read poems with such themes. actually, it’s quite rare considering how most poems in wattpad focus on grief, heartbreak and such. writing a poem about our dying environment and adding your own input into it is wonderful.
- lost in the shadows: a narrative poem. it ain’t rare but truly refreshing to read. you were able to tell a story as well as paint various emotions. i can feel the psychopathic energy radiating from the words and the insane twist at the end. i wish there were more poems like this. random but will make you grin and think in the end.
- despondency of humanity: hatred is indeed the world’s biggest problem. and is often caused by stupid reasons.
*poems (9)
- personally, i enjoyed the poems very much. a few more fixes here and there and they will be perfect. 5 for personal enjoyment
- some parts of certain poems were wordy. if you could rephrase them (or reword), please do so. this will also help you improve the rhythm. also, your imagery is something worth noticing. you’ve used them effectively, to a certain degree. so keep that up. 4 for style of writing
*spelling (4)
- not much to note. but there was time when you wrote ‘put’ instead of ‘but’ in despondency of humanity.
