The Things I Hate On Wattpad

12||generation/rebellion issues

if you're writing a story about a rebellion and how it ended, this is what you should NOT do.

1-give them the supplies to somehow make a fancy, high tech item. it's not reasonable.

2-don't give the person some nice mansion, they can't be the only person in the world who was not affected by the rebellion.

3-money sense! after a war like yours, you need to decide whether the currency will change due to government problems. don't change it along the way, it makes stories confusing, a lot...

short chapter, as like the rest. I swear, I lost all my inspiration after chapter 8 lol