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Puddleheart

Name:Puddleheart

Past names:Puddlepaw, puddlekit

(3/5. Can't see why she got  the prefix Puddle)

Name Reasoning:They were very kind and wanted to help out others if they sad. That's how they got her suffix

2.5/5. Heart is a bit of a generic suffix. And I don't know why she got the name Puddle. Here are some suffix ideas

Puddlebright-for her  selfless and determined  personality that shines  into murky water

Puddlesplash -her  selflessness? Maybe she could save a cat from a flood or something as a apprentice?

Puddleroot-for her supportive and hardworking personality that keeps other cats stable?

These aren't very good suffix ideas I'm sorry 

Gender;She

Sexualitly;Nonbinary

I'm not really sure what this means. Do you mean she is a she-cat likes Nonbinary cats?  Or that they are nonbinary? I'm pretty sure nonbinary is a gender identity and not a sexualitly but I'm  not the best at these sort of things. I'm just gonna assume that she's a she-cat attracted to nonbinary cats because she is referred to as a she lol.

Clan;MeadowClan. MeadowClan is a Clan on the mountain which has flowers all around.

Sounds pretty.

Appearance: a white grey she-cat with bright green eyes that change over the seasons

Appearance is 2/5! Seems accurate to me, but what do you mean by change?

I think white cats are very pretty lol.

Personality; She is very nice,kind, helpful,sometimes shy, and hardworking. 

4/10. I think she needs more flaws, and a bit stronger personality 

Maybe something like

-clingy and works very hard on helping other cats, only to spend little time on herself

-very empathic  to a fault, like she can't fight other cats because she spend so much thinking about their feelings and families and stuff. This would be the sort of thing if MeadowClan lives around other Clans, that would be very distasteful to MeadowClan, and she would probably be shunned.

-gullible 

-easily flustered 

-she tries to insert herself in all cat's problems and sort of blabbers sometimes

-talkative

Current rank;Warrior

Past ranks;Apprentice, kit

Cool

Mother: Splashingwing(a white-grey she-cat with blue eyes)

accurate. for a Clan on a meadow by a mountain, they have a lot of water related names.

Father;Unknown(a white grey Tom with green eyes)

bit weird her parents look exactly like each other expect for their eyes. how did having a unknown father impact MeadowClan's opinion of her? 

Littermates;none

Mentor:Flowersnow(a brown tabby with Rusty amber eyes)

hmmm...why would she have the suffix snow?

Friends;Violetsea(a red calico with blue eyes), 

If you're going for accurary,Violetsea would not be possible unless she has white on her face and is mostly white, but she's a calico so.  How do the cats know what a sea is?

Grey (a dark Grey rogue with dark green eyes)

Love interests; None

Kits; none

Apprentices; Waterpaw(a icy blue colored fur with blue eyes)

Blue eyes aren't possible for cats without white on their pelt, expect for Russian Blues and rare purebreed breeds. So unless Waterpaw is a Russian Blue which I've got a picture of below, she isn't really possible. Unless there is a twoleg village nearby, and Waterpaw's a former kittypet.

That could be cool, Puddleheart driven by her kindness and compassion to train Waterpaw when no other cat will.

 Maybe Waterpaw resents this bc she doesn't like pity and Puddleheart isn't sure how to deal with this. Maybe because of that  cats view her as a pushover, Waterpaw included.

Reltionships is 6.5 out of ten.

Backstory;She had a couple of friends growing up, but they were outside the Clan so she couldn't see them often. Puddlepaw liked to play mossball with Oceanpaw. Nothing bad has happened in Puddleheart's life, yet.

okay! 5/10 because this isn't detailed enough to find incouisties in, and that's fine if she's a background cat or a person you made up on the spot lol. What happened to Oceanpaw?

So overall, Puddleheart is a solid background/minor character with some potential 

Thank you so much for your submission!