Name: Ghost
Reasoning for prefix/suffix: Because he is swift,agile and slient. He could be in one spot at one moment then be in a different spot the next, without being detected.(ooh spooky. I like the reasoning behind it. 5/5)
Gender: Male
Sexualitly: Straight
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Clan: None
(Yay a rogue boy)
Apperance: Pale grayish white. Black front paws, ears, muzzle and tail. Icy blue eyes
(Nice. It's cool that you have white on him with blue eyes. Which is accurate to cats. You informed me of his build too which
Persona;lilty: Kind, caring, friendly. Always the ask questions firat kinda cat. Doesn't like to fight. Can be annoying without meaning to. Not the brightest.
(Okay so he's cautious. Other cats find that annoying. Maybe he's gullible, and as long as you answer his questions when you're not super obviously suspicious he'll trust you, or at least avoid fighting you. Maybe he really likes learning about other cats; hence the questions. He seems like a very nice, sweet guy. Maybe other cats would admire his good nature? Maybe he's really good at comforting people. Tho "a friend to all is a friend to none" so maybe he suffers from people pleasing tendencies, and because he trusts others so much he has little let over to trust himself? He seems to have the potential to be a very mentorly figure I like this guy. You've clearly layed out some flaws and good traits 10/10)
Current Rank: Rogue
Past Ranks: Rogue
Family: Unknown
Mentor figures: none
Friends/ enemies : none
Kits: None
Love instrests: None
Apprentices: None
(I asked for details to sparse because at the time I couldn't copy text from wattpad. Won't be grading this section . Thank you so much!!)
Backstory: When he was about a month old, a small group of rogues came (oh no.) They were friends of his father. They had made a deal, which the father did not keep. (Okay so my dude is flakey, doesn't keep his promises. What do they make a deal for? Had the rogues been over to their home before? ) His mom and father had a fight, which resulted in his father leaving, knowing the rogues were coming.(just casually leaving your family to die. Awful guy, this dad. Petty too.How did he know the rogues were coming?) He never gave warning to his mom, so as she was putting the kits to bed(him away first, since he was the youngest) (oh I like this detail, the family dynamics and how much care the mom has) the rogues attcaked killing his mom and siblings. They never found him. (poor baby. He was one moon old too, which means if we're going by realistic-ish cat development(but it's warrior cats so who cares)he was barely even sapient so he didn't understand what was happening and was confused and scared) He gets nightmares once in a while about the events, but doesn't remember anything about that night. (I would repress those memories too. It makes sense since he was only a moon old. I assume other cats named him ghost? Maybe that's why he became so stealthy because that was how he survived.)
Addintial Infomation: He is latger than most cats,sometimes earning the nickname, The Gentle Giant. He is sweet and kind, but also srong.
Over, all I really like this guy. Sorry it took me over a year.
