UmbreonxSylveon

Chapter 8: is this destiny

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Umbreon, finally curled up to sleep. With Flareon and Glaceon by his side he'd feel better. The tightness in his stomach began to disappear, he had them by his side. He knew he'd never let them near the trainers, they were to powerful even for the three of them.

The rising of the sun woke Umbreon up. He touched his nose to a few of the young Eevee, he could tell they were still sick.  He looked around the area to see if there was anything he could use in order keep them warm. His ears were pressed on his head deflecting the wind that had picked up.
He listened to see if anything else was around them. Fortunately they had no competition in this area. He found a few Lum berries, knowing they could potentially help the young.

Quickly he found his way back, he found a few worried pairs of eyes staring back at him. Espeon glanced towards him.
"I can feel how ill they are." Espeon grabbed some of the berries.
"I'm hoping these berries help, even in the slightest bit." Umbreon carried the rest over.
He poked one of the small Eevees awake. It pulled away from him. He gently pulled it closer again, he crushed the berry a little before offering it. The Eevee let put a tiny growl clearly annoyed.
"I know you don't want this but it'll help you." Umbreon tried again, reluctantly the berry was ate. Umbreon released a breath,
"How's it going for you Espeon?"
"They sure are stubborn for being sick." Espeon exhaled having just as much trouble. They continued until the young Eevee had all had some of the berries. The rest of the colony had woken up.

Flareon and Glaceon gathered around Umbreon.
"What's the plan Umbreon?" Flareon asked, chewing on an oran berry,
"I want to find a cave. We can stay there for a few days. And then hopefully a more permanent place to stay."
"Perfect, I can feel a storm brewing over the hills." Glaceon added.
"That adds to the urgency, we need to get a move on, gather everyone and let the young rest on us." Umbreon nodded grabbing to young Eevee today. Carefully resting them on his back.

He knew he should apologize to his mate, she had been doing her best to avoid him. 
Umbreon did his best to watch the clouds, he thought they were in the clearing. Suddenly bushes started rustling.

"Go hide now!" Umbreon set the young down. He scouted around. Noticing very familiar trainers. Umbreon listened.

"Look at this Eevee it is tiny!" One trainer said, this alerted Umbreon. He quickly ran to them to see one of the young Eevee back toward a tree.

His blood boiled. He released a shadow-ball just short of the trainer.
"It's the Umbreon again! I'll have you this time." Umbreon pinned his ears back, he stood between the Eevee and this trainer. He screeched, the trainer looked a little stunned. He used this time to headbutt the trainer backwards. He would win this fight. Get this trainer away from his colony.
"Go Sylveon,"

Umbreon was now faced to face with her again. Even more angry he tackled her. She wrapped her ribbons around him, trapping his legs. Umbreon struggled to get free. He bit down as hard as he could. She cried out releasing him.
"You did this. You need to back off." Umbreon growled at her. His fur standing on its end.
"I have no choice, they are obsessed with you." Sylveon pleaded. Umbreon could see the fake concern.  Umbreon charged another shadow-ball aiming it at Sylveon. Who narrowly missed it.
Sylveon used swift. It hit Umbreon. He fell back, it didn't hurt enough for him to stop. Sylveon had already begun to charge at him, sinking her teeth into his neck. He reared up throwing Sylveon off.
He felt some blood drip down his neck. Sylveon looking worse for ware than him.

A Pokeball came flying toward him, he just barely ducked out of the way. He huffed, charging toward Sylveon. He knew in a different world this wouldn't happen. In a different world their home would not have burnt down.  In another world maybe he would have had a trainer, but in this world; he was relied upon. His tackle seemed to shake the forest around him. The ringing in his ears told him, he needed to end the battle fast.

Charging one final shadow-ball he shot it toward the trainer and Sylveon. It landed, he watched as Sylveon fell. The trainer looked horrified at the damage.

Umbreon snarled toward the trainer, showing he would not be doing that again. He snuck away, crushing the Pokeball with his feet. He grabbed the young Eevees' scruff. A little bit away was his colony. Relief again washed over a few faces.
"Umbreon you're bleeding." Glaceon trotted over taking the Eevee.
"You should see my opponent." Umbreon joked, coughing slowly regaining his breath.
"Not funny. How did this little one get there." Glaceon pondered.
"It probably followed Umbreon, it hasn't taken its eyes off of him since this morning." Espeon pointed out.
"Well that little one needs to be shown how to fight before it can go charging into battle." Umbreon continued to laugh, crouching down next to the little Eevee. "I just noticed it has green eyes, unusual. Lucky, that's his nickname." Umbreon stared at the green eyes, maybe that was the destiny of this young Eevee, luck.
Espeon laughed a little "Lucky? Why?"
"He gave me good luck in my fight. The Pokeball wasnt even close to hitting me this time." Umbreon nodded resting his tail over Lucky.
"Here let's keep moving, I have a feeling we will find somewhere to stay. C'mon Lucky, you're riding with me." Umbreon picked Lucky up knowing he wouldn't respond for a few more days if not weeks.
They seemed to walk for an eternity. Finally Umbreon spotted a cave.
"I see a cave let's stay here for a few days letting the young rest. " Thunder roared above interrupting Umbreon talking.

He set Lucky down who still intently stared at him. Umbreon went out to find more berries, having Leafeon and Jolteon help him.
"So how are you two feeling?"
"Physically much better than you. You've been doing good despite our situation." Leafeon smiles nipping berries off the bushes.
"If our young were healthier I'd feel better. But I know you're just as concerned. Our old leader was not nearly as involved." Jolteon mumbled, almost silent.
" The goal it to be together, I am not choosing to create a hierarchy." Umbreon shrugged, clearly their old leader could have learned a few things. "Come on let's go back before a downpour starts." Umbreon led them back, giving out the berries.
He gave Lucky a berry and whispered "one day I'll tell you about destiny."
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Update within a month let's go :)

Hopefully the battle made sense. Umbreon is supposed to be stronger because he is angry (think of it like an attack stat boost)

I can feel the story heating back up, so be on the look out :D

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