I'm rewriting it.

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Fuck it.

I'll rewrite it and work on my new book.

I was going to just continue it but I had a stroke of inspiration to remake it !

Thank you for all your comments. I'll publish the first chapter of Sora's book and see how you all react before I continue publishing it. And I'll publish the first chapter of the rewrite for this book at the same time.

But yeah, prepare for the new Tia Blue ! She will be different than what you remember, I was a lot younger when I wrote this.

There's a lot in this action but please read.


As I said I'm changing things -> Similar plot but still different.

First of all - Tia is now going to be half human, half Cybertronian. And not white.
I despise myself for making her white in the first place, it just feels so wrong.

I've been thinking of a face claim too and true to my Babymetal obsession, I'm thinking of making Tia look like Yui Mizuno or YuiMetal. She's cute and adorable and I think it'll fit Tia. Obviously see her as you like, I just like giving people a visual and a way of looking at what I see.

With Yui being the face claim, Tia will look a lot younger but Yui is actually the correct age of Tia so it makes sense. In the gifs Yui is like 15-17 so she was underage (she's now 23 btw) - that's why this will not have the actual actors used - the age of the characters are the age they were in the books and nothing inappropriate will happen until they are of age. Does that make sense ? So Jacob is actually 16, not looking like an adult - yeah?
If you want me to change the face claim I can but Yui is adorable and I genuinely see her as Tia.


I'll make a nice little edit of Yui with more characteristics of Tia.
It's not great but here (this is her with dark hair because for the life of me can I edit her in the hair I want her to have, it's lightly yellow like it's been dyed over so there you go) :

 It's not great but here (this is her with dark hair because for the life of me can I edit her in the hair I want her to have, it's lightly yellow like it's been dyed over so there you go) :

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I might need a face claim for Cody but idk yet. She's American and both her parents are white so she might need to be white and looking like Mikaela.



More things will be changed but you'll see as you read!





Also I'm thinking of a new cover - with not the same design but a similar design as the one below
It's not the best but idk what to do

Also I'm thinking of a new cover - with not the same design but a similar design as the one below It's not the best but idk what to do

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Also I'm thinking of renaming this - HoneyBee.
What do you think?

Question : would you like me to keep the old chapters and just add the new ones after like a chapter break or delete them and fully replace them with the new ones?

I'll see you all in the first chapters of this rewrite and Sora's book
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