The ARMY Awards 2022 [JUDGING]

Elimination 1

There were a total of 6 books in this category so 3 will be eliminated and 3 will continue to the final round.

Reviews are only meant to help you. Writers that talk down on the eliminated books or their authors will be considered for disqualification, do not talk down on writers.

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1: Ruby Red by strawberryiscream

Total: 42/100

Review: First of all name of the book is unique. The book cover is messy. Selection of words are really good. The plot of the story is quite good, very slow paced story . After first two chapters it somewhat felt boring. But overall good concept. Keep it up.

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2: Mr. Kim by zoshlovesbts

Total: 65 (averaged as this book was judged by 2 judges)

Review 1: The story was very good, it had a very deep meaning and it also gives a lesson to the readers. I am lucky to be able to read this book.^_^Keep up with the good work girl!! (total from this judge: 94/100)

Review 2: The story was over all quite good but has a common plot. Emotions were briefly written. There is a mistake of writing in small letters/lower case and run on sentences. Plus writing 'I' in small letter. The story description was attractive. The book cover was simple and clean. (total from this judge: 36/100)

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3: Hotel Red Stone by taetaeficks

Total: 75/100

Review: Hello! Admin here. I like that you saw something and wanted to write your version of it, sneaking some leads here and there with a flair for romance. I do have to say though, ever since I read in the description that this was basically a show with changed names that's all I could think about. Hence the reason for the content score, it felt like it was just a taken idea that had add-ons to try and make it yours. It also seemed to move a little too fast and I wasn't understanding the relationships between the characters at all. All of the text that was in bold was all I could focus on and it was almost as if the dialogue was a jumbled paragraph that I couldn't seem to make out. I think that if you make everything in the same font and separated the dialogue more then it would flow more smoothly. Overall, I liked that you saw something that you wanted to make your own but I wouldn't include it in the description next time because, like I had explained, it just made me think of what the original was and how it fits together with the story.

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