The ARMY Awards 2022 [JUDGING]

Elimination #1

There were 16 books total for this category so this elimination will contain 4 books.

Reviews are only here to help you. Writers that talk down on eliminated books and their authors will be considered for disqualification, do not talk down on the writers.

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1: Starry Night by Reeruworld00

Total: 61/100

Review: This book and plot you selected is amazing and I liked the theme you chose for the cover.But you know first impression is the best impression. You need lot of improvement in sentence construction, need perfection in grammar and most importantly spelling too.You need strict editing by yourself of punctuation and overall editing. I hope you will edit those.I really enjoyed your story, keep it up!

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2: Imperfectly Perfect by Pritharmixer

Total: 64/100

Review: The book cover isn't very eye-catching, and the description didn't help much in getting me intrigued. I feel like it gave too much away for a oneshot summary. Grammar is readable, but there's quite a few errors with tenses and forgetting certain words to properly complete a sentence. More so, the author shouldn't use this "~" in dialogue to express elongation. The pace of the plot is quick, and there's a lot of jumps from one point to another, but I was able to follow along. I had a hard time connecting with characters emotionally, but I loved their distinct personalities! The friendship between y/n and Jimin is really endearing. I love how supportive they are of each other. The story isn't exactly original, I've read similar things like this before, just not as condensed. I wasn't really excited about it, but the characters made up for it a bit. That was one portion of the plot I think the author executed really well!

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3: The Late Night Return by HawtChillie

Total: 78/100

Review: The story is great...I am getting a bit impatient about what will happen next haha but...The pace is a bit slow, I know you are busy and all but as a reader when you start being impatient about the story and its pace is slow so the interest a reader has for the story slowly vanishes and not as a judge but as a friend I don't your story and hard work to go in vain so...make sure you start working on your pace and All the best, Keep up with the good work^_^

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4: Broken by Gonewiththewind03

Total: 81/100

Review: At first glance, the cover is a bit messy. The colors and fonts clash with each other. The description was a bit short. It doesn't give the reader a lot to go off of. There were a few errors with punctuation, but the word choices the author used really made up for it! The style of writing was really poetic, almost like a song. I felt like I connected more with Jungkook emotionally because of it. The pace was a bit quick and jumpy, but with short stories like this one, it's how they are written. Overall, I quite enjoyed it! The plot wasn't exactly original, but the way the author chose to write it made it enjoyable.

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