The ARMY Awards 2022 [JUDGING]

Elimination #1

For this category, there is a total of 5 books so this elimination consists of only 2 books that didn't make it to the final round. The elimination will consist of the total score for the book and the review provided by the judge.

Remember, reviews are here to help you, not bring you down. Writers that talk down on the eliminated books or their authors will be considered for disqualification, please do not bring down any of the writers.

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1: Love in Vain by hartlian

Total: 18/100

Review: Honestly, I feel absolutely terrible giving such a terrible score...Please don't come after me...But I'm at loss. I mean, nothing's right in the story...Joonie being Seokjin's biological father? Jin getting pregnant? And the whole plot is a little too crazy. I mean sure Jin is accused of a murder he didn't commit. Things like that happen. But the way it happens is puzzling, Jungkook has no real reason to be angry. Also, I get it that it's hard writing in English when it's not your mother language, but maybe writing in your own language for a start would be easier? Idk. Cos it makes it hard to read tbh.I couldn't really empathised with Seokjin since his whole prison experience was summed up in a few short paragraphs. And rape can't be mentioned the same way one would mention getting a haircut. I'm sorry for giving such a terrible review, I really am, but I don't want to lie either.I struggled to read the story, and topics such as rape and that kind of stuff...it's always delicate to mention. So one should alway be careful.

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2: Married to Mr. Arrogant by my_sugardaddy_jin

Total: 55/100

Review: Hello! Admin here! I honestly couldn't really read and understand the book because of the grammatical errors and how the story was written. It was as if the book was only dialogue and there were a lot of time skips, which made it go very fast. My first impression was the the cover and the title was nice but there were grammatical errors even in the description which threw me off. I hate to say it but there are quite a lot of stories with the same plotline so it doesn't seem very original to me. I think that with some editing and proper detailing in the chapters, it has the potential to become a cute book! Please keep writing, this review it only meant to help you.

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