Zakhele's Love 7

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Ok bafundi I want to try something different, like...Narrating?just this chapter and ya'll can tell me how I did with writing the novel in a narrative view 📖🙈🤍🥺

INSERT 7

ZAKHELE

This afternoon Luyanda said she loves me, I've never been so happy,but I really need to meet her father just for him to get familiar with me.

LUYANDA

I'm so happy, I know it's just a promise ring but it just gives a nice feeling damn.
But we need to have a sit down with my dad speaking if dad let me call him...

CALL>>

'Sawubona babami'
'Sawubona MaDube omncane'
'How are you dad'
'I'm well, umfana wakwa' Gumede un'phethe kahle kodwa? '
' yes baba usphethe kahle, I promise'
'ok, tell him I said I want you guys here before 13h00 tomorrow, me and him have things to discuss '
'OK, I will'
'ni' lale kahle zi'ngane zam'
'Goodnight daddy'

Zakhele walks in right when I end the call and says he puts Bayanda to sleep.

"Bath or Shower"
ME:anything works for me
HIM:Bath it is.

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We just got out of the bath and we now in bed, he's spooning me and this time I can feel his d*ck on my ass, lol so I ask him...
ME:Baby you good?
ZAKHELE:I'm good, why?
ME:I'm just asking.

I actually feel bad for him, so I untangle myself from him and I straddle him and kiss him he pulls out of the kiss and his eyes are squint, watery and red so I go down on him, pull down his sleeping shorts, I slowly slip his d*ck past my lips in my mouth down my throat. I moan while I go a little deeper and stop when it hits my gag reflex. My ears are ringing because the only thing I can feel hear and smell is him in my mouth. I pop it out then pushes in gently cursing and fuck this feels so good. When I breath in through my nose he thrusts and my whole body is vibrating. He is so gentle and he fills my whole mouth and throat. When I swallow I can feel his dick head and he curses every time.

By the time I'm done his heavy breathing and shit so I get off and into the bathroom I go, rinse my mouth with water and I get into the bedroom with a wet warm towel and clean him up, lol funny how it's always the other way around.

"thank you babe, you've got talents"
ME:lol, I can be your slut when I want to be.

I say winking and I get back into my bedside and I feel him get into the bad and he pulls me onto his chest.

"I wifing your slutty self!"

He says kissing my forehead and into lala land, before I sleep did mention that I told him what my father said during the moment of me giving head, I think me and him are the type to communicate during intimate times,I'm loving it for me!

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ZAKHELE

Goodmorning bahlali, I'm in a good mood today and a part of me is sad my family have to go home today, disheartening that's why I need to send lobola to her home and change Bayanda's surname, yes I'm making them mine, rightfully.

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NARRATIVE VIEW-KHWEZI
THEMBISA📍

They just entered Luyanda's home and they've been welcomed by her father at the door.

Zakhele's feels a little bit nervous but he is just trying to act cool.

Dingane is just happy to have his daughter and grandchild back home, the house has been a little too quiet without Bayanda' s cries.

DINGANE:Yah, mfana let's go sit in the garden and talk

He leads Zakhele to the garden leaving Luh to make an easy Sunday lunch.

DINGANE:now boy I want us to talk about your real intentions, your relationship with my daughter and mostly that ring on her left hand.

He says the last part giving Zakhele a death stare, Zakhele feels a little uncomfortable with the conversation they about to have but it's a needed conversation. But he's set on being confident about his response

"Well  Mbuyazi, firstly my intentions with Luyanda and Bayanda I think are very clear to see, I really want them in my life, I want to give them what my love has to offer, I know about her past and Baba I promise to never ever lay my hand on her and if I ever ran out of love for her I would let her go but I can't say the same for Bayanda that's my son, no can ever dispute that but I don't think my love for her will ever end or run out, secondly my relationship with her is more than what it is, I'm going to marry your daughter and give you grandchildren hopefully with your blessings, lastly the ring, it is a promise ring, my promises to her are tied to that ring."

DINGANE:I hear you mfana,now I've done my research on you and obviously your title that you hold kwa Thugela and your gangsterism, does she know all of that.

" eyy, honestly? She knows about me being a gangster but just not my royal status."

DINGANE:I trust you'll keep her and my grandson safe, do tell her please and not that they need your safe keeping after all her father is thee Dragon

Zakhele is shook-eth right now? DRAGON? Thee Mafia, cruelest South African mafia.

"Don't look so shook, she doesn't know this and don't you dare, but boy break her heart and I'll burn you alive"

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VOTE! now tell me? How did I do with narrating but I think imma stick to POV'S.
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