Pence Pence [BFB/BFDI AU]

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So uh

Yeah so for rn I'm going to re-write the book

I noticed that the whole book just didn't make sense seeing as I left out alot of characters and some roles didn't make sense

Example:

- Fanny if part of DPA (death pact again) so why would she be on Pencils side when she obviously is going to be killing and Fanny would be against that idea [Same with lightning]

- I left put like more then 30 characters cuz I thought they weren't important or interesting (when they r)

- I didn't proof read the story and just wrote it so it had a bunch of mistakes

- the story line made no sense at all cuz I added references but made it so TPOP was over so the time line went WEEEEE

- The hosts whwrnt there but for the book idea I had they where going to be there so idk how thay would work

- most of the ideas I had for the book would have messed up the books time line more or would have made it more confusing

- I at first added my own head cannons and was going to add more and possibly ships but in a book about this stuff it wouldn't make sense and would have messed up the stories more then it was

- just hated what I was doing in genral with the book and felt like I was dumping random shit onto it

- and this is not even all of it but I put enough already

So as you see

I wasent the most happy with the book so I will be rewriting it and stuff if I feel like it cuz I really liked the story alot

Also sorry for a while that I de listed the book but I will put it here for now while I re write the book so I will publish the new chapters and delete the old ones once I do that

Thanks