BEAUTIFUL SMILE
Chapter 12
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Third person's POV
Its been month since she was awake
It's pass 10 in the evening when Elizabeth's hand move. Their are her friends, sister, fiancé, bestfriend, brother, Joy and Johan who check her up.
Her sister never leave her on the bed alone, her brothers never forgot to brough her, her favorites, flowers, food, drinks and cartoon character toy/ key chain, her friends never forgot to visit her with a smile on their faces. Even though it hurts so much there's still maintain their smiles because they knew to themselves that Elizabeth won't be happy seeing them puffing eyes / swollen-eyes. They tried to smile but tears always trick them
They kept their prayers, they never ask God anything but her health. They kept on praying and asking why her, in all people in this world why her?
She was beautiful inside and out
She was lovely
She was loving
She was wary
She was smart
She was solicitous
She was kind
She was brave
She was Loyal
She was polite
She was generous
She was contented
She was true
She was strong, as they knew it
Yet God chooses her to suffer in this pain
They kept asking why her in all people in the world
Yet they kept praying for her
10:49 pm
A miracle happened as people around,
Is praying for her to be cured.
God heard their prayers,
She woke up from an everlasting sleep.
One of her fingers is moving,
One of her friends saw it rising.
Tears on her eyes,
Started streaming in her face.
Their friends panicked,
They looked at her on the bed.
Happiness on their faces appeared.
They called a doctor,
They check on her.
Her eyes started to open,
Those people around her are in joy.
Doctors are now full of hope so as her friends,
and family as they kept the smile on their faces.
(by me: ilusionlie)
Their eyes are full of happiness as they saw her opening her eyes. Others kept on praying and thanking
As khaliah, her highschool friend open her phone and put the recorder on so that this memory won't be forgotten, the time she woke up after a month of sleep or coma.
They are so happy seeing their friend woke up, their stopping their tears to stream as she adjust her sight
She's adjusting her eyes because of the light. Her eyes finally opens and the room is now full of joy, tears, hope and miracle.
They kept on murmuring some words to her
''oh my God, you're awake? You're awake!!'' her sister Celestine says and hugged her
"our little sister is awake. Thank you doctors, thank you" her older brother thanking and hugging the doctors and walk toward her and hugged her tightly not wanting to let go
BINABASA MO ANG
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Short StoryAuthor: enegeregene Genre: Random/ short story/ not fiction/ tragic Language: tagalog and English What would happen if the person they thought who had no problem was the person who had a burdensome problem? You might think that the smiles she's gi...
