TW: abuse, foul language, and rape
6 years ago
"Mom! Mom! Where are you! Momma!" Lorelei shouts for her mom. A random man walks over towards Lorelei.
"Did you lose your mom?" The male asks.
"Yes." Lorelei mutters with tears in her eyes.
"Well, I saw a woman back there looking for a girl. It might be your mom. Do you want me to bring you to her?" The male asks innocently.
"Yes please." Lorelei sniffles.
The male walks Lorelei over to the other side of the park. He then goes towards a van.
"My mommy's in here?" Lorelei asks.
"Yes. You have to go in and get her." The male opens the door for Lorelei.
She climbs into the van and searches for her mom. The man closes the door and leaves Lorelei in the van. He goes upfront and gets in the driver seat. He drives to his house.
The House
The man stops the car. He goes into the back and opens the door. He sees Lorelei in the corner sobbing and shaking.
"Sweetie, I'm gonna take good care of you now." The man says.
Lorelei peaks over her arms and looks over at the man.
"I want mommy." She mutters.
"Well you're not getting her!" The man suddenly shouts as he slams his down on the trunk.
He gets in the van and picks up Lorelei. He lays her body over his shoulder. Lorelei fights with all her might, but the man's too strong.
They go into a barn. The man goes down into a secret basement of the barn.
He drops Lorelei harshly onto the floor. Lorelei looks up at him, and he leaves the room.
Lorelei looks around the room. She sees a girl sleeping in the corner of the room. She looked to be about 17 years old. Her body was all bruised and it had multiple cuts all over.
She rushes over to the girl. She shakes the girl awake. The girl wakes up and gasps.
"You scared me!" She shouted.
"I'm sorry." Lorelei's quite voice stated.
The girl sits up and looks at Lorelei.
"You're the newest girl." The girl said more like a statement.
"What?" Lorelei asks confused.
"He brings new girls all the time. I've seen about 10 girls in the last 3 years." The girl says.
"Well, where are all the girls now?" Lorelei asks.
"I don't really now. The man would take them and I'd never see them again." The girl explains.
"Is that gonna happen to me?" Lorelei asks fearfully and the girl could tell she was scared.
"Not on my watch. I won't let him take you." The girl says.
"Thank you." Lorelei smiles through the pain.
"So, what about we tell each other about ourselves?" The girl suggested.
"Ok."
"I'll go first. My name is Bradley. I'm 17. I've been down here for about 5 years but I only really have recollection of the last 3 years. I like to protect the other girls that come down here. That's about it. How about you?" Bradley says.
"My name's Lorelei. I'm 6. Today, my mommy took me to the park. I walked away from her. Before I knew it, I lost her. The man told me he had my mom. I followed him and he pushed me into a van. I then ended up here." Lorelei starts crying again.
Bradley wipes Lorelei's tears.
"I'm sorry that happened to you, especially at such young of an age." Bradley looks down.
"It's ok I guess."
"Well, we should get some rest." Bradley tells Lorelei.
They both get comfortable.
"Goodnight, Bradley."
"Goodnight, Lorelei."
They both drift off to sleep.
The Next Day
Bradley wakes up and sees Lorelei sleeping peacefully next to her. Suddenly, the man barges in the door. Lorelei jumps awake when she hears him barge in.
The man walks over to them aggressively. Instinctively, Bradley covered up Lorelei with her body.
"Why the hell do you always do this shit!" The man yells.
He grabs Bradley and takes her away from Lorelei. He throws her across the room. He then changed his focus towards Lorelei.
He slapped her as hard as he could. He then kicked her in the gut and face a few times. He grabbed her and placed her on his shoulder again.
He goes to leave the basement, but Bradley tries to take Lorelei from him. He elbows her in the face and she gets knocked out. Lorelei screams for Bradley as she starts to cry.
"She can't save you! Now be quiet! You yell, she dies." The man threatens.
Lorelei nods to herself and cries silently.
"Be quiet!" He yells.
Lorelei cried even quieter.
They get to the man's guest bedroom. He drops Lorelei onto the bed. He takes of her pants and undergarments and he takes his off. He puts her into the the handcuff restraints he had on the bed.
"What are you doing?" Lorelei stutters in complete fear.
"This will only hurt a little bit." The man says.
He puts his privates into hers. She screams in pain. The man starts thrusting his hips. He goes deeper and deeper. The more he pushes, the louder Lorelei's screams and cries get louder.
"Please stop!" Lorelei pleads in pain.
The man continues to rape Lorelei. He finally feels that he's had enough. He takes out his privates and puts his clothes back on. He unhooks her and puts her clothes back on.
The man brings Lorelei back down to the barn's basement. He drops her on the ground. Bradley crawls over to her.
"What did he do to you up there?" Bradley asks.
"He chained me to his bed without my clothes on. He took off his clothes too. Suddenly there was this sharp pain. It kept happening and happening." Lorelei stares into space while speaking.
Bradley instantly pulls her into a hug.
"I'm so sorry, Lor, I should've been there for you. This shouldn't have happened." Bradley whisper.
"It really hurt." Lorelei whispers too.
"I know it did. Let's get some rest to take your mind off of it." Bradley suggests.
They both get comfortable again. This time, Lorelei grabbed Bradley's hand and held it the whole time they slept.
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Escape || Criminal Minds Story
Fanfiction• Almost 6 years ago, Steve, kidnapped a 6 year old girl, Lorelei Martin. Lorelei managed to escape. She made her way to the hospital where the BAU pays a visit. She helps them catch her capture. • set in season 5 of Criminal Minds • TW: abuse, kid...
