Star Wars reaper invasion

The death within

 (This is the second chapter but right now I still can't figure out how long the story should be, so please comment below if you have any suggestions or improvements. I am open to criticism.

Harbinger realized the potential danger of this galactic empire. He learned of the executor-class Super star destroyer. A 19 km long ship is brimmed with weapons. 750 twinned heavy turbo laser batteries, 1000 turret light turbo laser batteries, 100 twin battle ship ion cannon, 125 concussive Missle launcher and 250 turret mounted quad turbo laser batteries.

Harbinger and a few of his brethren must upgrade themselves to be capable of fighting these executer or else they will be executed. Harbinger also realized that aiding the rebellion with too many reapers will come off as suspicious, so he decided to only send along 100 reapers spread out across their galaxy.

According to their new intel most of the separatist ships have been destroyed. So they must act like a small remnant. The others will stay in the unknown regions of the galaxy. Maybe if they can find any life there they can increase their numbers before the main invasion.

Then when they start to find any sentient life in the outer rim, they will also gain intelligence from said species.

The shield intel on the Star destroyers indicates that when the shields are destroyed only a single well landed blast at the bridge will decapitate it in turn destroying the entire ship's control and making it a lot less effective.

Either way as long as the Star destroyers lose their shield it is then only a few shots away from blowing up.

As they finished planning out the attack strategies they all jumped to the unknown region. After they have arrived they started scouting out the location and set up a base. They started to lay low for a while.

He wants to retrofit the others before sending them out. As their barriers won't last very long against sustained turbolaser fire. They need to create a shield for that, they also needed to create other weapons around the ship to make sure that they won't be flanked as that is one of their weaknesses, it just didn't really affect them in their universe.

They start to adapt to this galaxy when suddenly a ship came out of no where. The reapers immediately deployed their oculus fighters to try and capture the ship. The ship started to turn around and prepare for what is assumed to be escape. The oculus destroyed he engines before the ship got anywhere and then the reapers moved to capture the ship as they lacked tractor beams.

One of the reapers put the ship inside of itself and the husks where sent to investigate. "Please don't kill us!" A voice shouted from inside of the ship. "I will give you anything!" A coward, they are always useful. The reapers started to question him about everything he knows but soon it became to slow for them so they just extracted the info from his brain. After words they turned the other people into reaper material and used their knowledge to gain an edge in this world.

They learnt of this galaxies armaments and shields but most importantly they learned of the chiss ascendency. The reapers got to work retrofitting themselves using their collector slaves for material and labor. After a week they all are now able to fully combat the ships of this galaxy, so they sent out the reapers for the rebellion.  Now harbinger decided not to waste time. Now ,  they invade the chiss ascendancy. He told every reaper to head to a set of  coordinates  and they should soon be able to find the chiss ascendancy.

As they jumped to they started to look around and soon they found the chiss ascendancy. They wanted to slowly drift there and then capture some more people so they sent a single reaper for now, but as soon as their first reaper got near the planet the Chiss attacked with their chiss heavy cruisers. 

The reaper immediately called in the others to reinforce it. The reaper it self fought off at least 10 chiss heavy cruiser and has been able to slice one up with it's magnetohydrodynamic cannon. 

Soon enough the turbo lasers of the chiss started to penetrate the outer shields and are now damaging the reapers barrier.

However as the chiss are gaining superiority the reaper reinforcements arrived and opened up their tentacles. The destroyers started to latch on to a few of the heavy cruisers and fired their smaller beams into the bridge.

Soon enough many of the heavy cruisers started to fall, but during that time a chiss commander in a last bid attempt , rammed his ship into the damaged reaper destroying the destroyer but also damaging his own vessel before that reaper turned around and used it's tentacles to destroy the heavy cruiser by simply hitting it.

Only three heavy cruisers left and 6 reapers. They all fired their magneto hydrodynamic cannons at one destroying 1 more cruiser but the others dodged.

Whatever the case, they have the advantage now. They start to invade the planet and started to blast through the ground forces. Soon enough all of the biomass will be theirs...

Rebel pov

The rebels are currently at Echo base on hoth. Performing their usual duties when suddenly their is a commotion about commander Luke Skywalker. It seems that he has returned as he was missing yesterday.

Later that day Luke skywalker recovered and resumed his duties. Suddenly they detected a large number of Star destroyers near Hoth.

" They found us! Everyone to your battle stations." There is panic all over the base as they started the evacuation. The rebels started to board their snow speeder and prepared to attack the incoming  imperial forces.

The transports are being sent out as the Ion cannons covered them. Soon a third party jumped into the fray which also shocked the imperials. Those ships destroyed the Star destroyers that are deactivated by the ion cannons and then started engaging the other Star destroyers in the way.

Soon at least 3 Star destroyers have fallen and most of the rebels have evacuated. Those ships also sent corvettes that transformed into walkers to help the rebels. The walkers are scarab like creatures that have a plate on their face which opened up to shoot a red beam that cuts through the At-At's neck piece. After a while nearly all of the At At are down and the rebels began retreating into the last transports to escape the planet.

Princess Leia POV

The destruction of the walkers by an unknown force is a shock to both her and Han. She prepares to contact the rescuers but Han stopped her. "They don't look very friendly, we shouldn't trust anyone too fast leia." "Well Luke and I trusted you so let's send those coordinates and get out of here." Leia snapped. 

Suddenly she got the message from the captain of what is probably those ships, the captain seems frantic and the background doesn't look like anything she has ever known. " we are a separatist remnant and we wanted to join the rebellion! However it seems we have arrived at a very bad time!"  "No captain you came the perfect time to help the rebellion! We appreciate your support but now we have to evacuate. Sending the coordinates to you now!" "Thank you, let's meet up at the rendezvous." 

As soon as the coordinates were sent all of the "separatist forces" pulled away from the battle while their ships fired a few shots and they all escaped the planet. Now leia and Han quickly rushed to the millennium falcon and set course to the rendezvous. 

She and Han rushed through the halls and into the hanger where the last remaining people are leaving from. She and Han quickly called down chewie and boarded the millennium falcon.

Reaper POV 

The reapers headed to the rendezvous, ha ha, foolish girl they now have the rebellions location, and soon they will indoctrinate them all....

(I might be slow to make the chapters but I will post them eventually, I won't give up on this story as I already have the plans ready for everything. Please comment for suggestions because I  can be very flexible with where this story is going :)  feel free to criticize)