A.N so this is not going to be a long author note... I just wanted to say that thank you all for 1k.... I had no idea that this story would get so much reads and all.... thank you all for your support... so I'm going to dedicate this chapter to my best friend and half-sister. @tsianhm thank you for all your support... you read my story from the beginning and although it wasn't good... you supported me and I appreciate that.... hope all of you enjoy this chapter.
Tobias' p.o.v
so... last night we played truth or dare...I was trying to make Tris to take off her cloths and I did succeeded.... well a little. when we return she was so tired so she went to sleep but I stayed up... I was thinking about how weird she acted this afternoon when I woke her.... I mean what was she dreaming about
that made her so angry and also upset... I mean she was literally crying her eyes out in the bathroom... and then I remember the whole "bathroom accident" I don't know why she think she is not beautiful!!! I mean.... she is gorgeous and perfect and I want her to know that I never leave her alone. as a matter of fact I think that I'm the one who should be worried about her leaving me... cause there are so many perfect men which are way much better than me and she would be happier with them. but I'm really grateful that she has chosen me....
and I hope than one day she'll marry me and becomes Tris Eaton and be mine forever...
.... next morning.....
I woke her up and she jumps into the bathroom to get a quick shower... I don't need a shower so I just take my cloths off and then put on my favorite black pants and then again go to the kitchen to get a bottle of water... and I get back to my room to put on my shirt..., suddenly the bathroom's door gets open and Tris comes out ( again in a towel) and then she sees me(shirtless). she stares at my body for a little to long and then she suddenly realizes that and then looks away blushing. "enjoying the view?" I ask teasing her. she blushes even more "maybe.." she answers and then goes to the drawer to choose her cloths she picks up a black tank top and a her black yoga pants and after that she returns to the bathroom to get dressed. after she is ready we went to the pit, grabbing a muffin on our way. when we get to the training room she goes to the board and write the names and also those who have whether make it in or not. and after that everyone came in and the first thing that got their attention was their names on the board.
1- Bobby
2- Annabeth
3- Ginny
4- set
5- Sophie
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I see Bobby smirking and also some initiates which are crying cause they haven't make it, suddenly I see Bobby going towards Tris I get a little closer to them. "So what's up sunshine?" Bobby says. oh my god, I just hate it when he flirts with her and I always get the feeling that I should gather the gang and then together we'll kill him, anyway I see that Tris is trying to get away from him. "what is it cupcake? now that I've got first it must be your honor to go out with me. right?" he says trying to grab her hands. " leave me alone." she says. I can see that she is going into one of her moods which means she is now afraid ( the whole fear of intimacy ) "I mean a small doll who got perhaps I don't know maybe 7 in her own initiation should be proud of going out with a number one. I am way much better than the old dude four . what did he got in his initiation? 5? 4?" he says and then try to kiss her. that's it I can't take anymore I'm going to rip his throat and then practice my kicks on him. I walk forward and shout "Hey. get away from my girl." he turns towards me which gives Tris some time to get away. " what's up number boy?" I punch him in his mouth instead of bothering myself to answer him. "owwwwwwwwwwwwww..." he screams like a baby boy ( more like when you take Uriah's dauntless cake... ) ''what happened? the first rank is screaming only because a punch in his mouth?" I ask. I can feel every one staring at us, probably because I just punched an initiates or because I just reviled our relation ship. oops Tris is going to kill me!!!! he doesn't answer me. instead he try to punch me but I grab his fist "you probably shouldn't have done that" I say before punching him in his guts and then kicking him in the place that sun never shines. and I keep punching him until I feel small yet strong hands grabbing me from back. 'that's enough four" Tris says. I want to punch him more but I want her to be happy and if not punching and asshole make her glad then I wont. then Tris goes forward and then kick him once and after that she returns to me. " how was that Bobby pin???" I ask sounding a little childish then I say " stay away from my girl and you wont be hurt. next time I'll be less generous." now my voice is the one that Tris calls 'the scary instructor four voice' " same for me" she says while staring at Sophie. then we start leaving the room suddenly I remember something so I turn and say " oh and just for the records, we both got first loser" and with that we leave.
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