This chapter is dedicated to nikkibobikki for posting the second comment on my chapter that I just posted like 3 hours ago and now I am convinced to write another chap so here I go.
Oh and thanks for the votes and comments. I love seeing them and they encourage me to write more. And I love this one comment on my eighth chapter from somebody who wrote I had some really good potential and I want to say thank you to them. It means so much when somebody says I'm a good writer. Thank you <3
Oh and P.S. I'm doing a new p.o.v.
And I have tried to have the characters mention how there mermaids or there tails and stuff. I almost forgot they were mermaids.
RAVEN'S P.O.V.
I loved my tail. It's scales are black and there are a few silver ones. The fin part was suppose to be black but because it is so thin it is grey but I still adore my tail.
My long black hair went all the way to my waist. I had a streak of grey in the short bangs that covered the left side of my face. I use to have brown hair but when I changed into a mermaid it changed.
My eyes were a pale blue. As the blue went to the black outline it turned a dark blue but only right at the line. Somebody told me my eyes were like the sky.
My lips were nice and plump but my top lip was just a little smaller so I always had this small pout on my face but when I did my signature smirk it made me look evil. Not that I need it. I already am evil. They were always a natural pink.
My nose was small but defined. It wasn't pointy but not flat and squished into my face. Nice and perfect. But I did have a small scar on the side of it because I cut it when running around and falling when I was small.
My ears were covered in earrings. I had the original piercing that like every girl has. And then I had three more like that going up on both sides. The first rings at the bottom were just black studs. Then the next was a white pearl. Then the next two were dark silver rings that went out on the side of my ear. Then at the top on the left side I had a big black diamond going through the harder part. Then on the right I had a small white bar going through the two small walls that circle that area.
I had sharp features but also beautiful.
My right wrist had a small fancy tattoo on the inside. It was the name Rosalina. The name of my mother. And Kristannas. Also the sister of Hollie and Syrinia. Well secret sister who is now dead. And there mothers sister is now dead too. My grandmother. Both dead because I killed them. On my left wrist was the same but a different name. Jolinia. My grandmothers name.
My stomach had a scar going down the right side. It was from a surgery I had as a child. I had to have my gulbladder taken out. I also had my navel pierced. The ring was a mermaid with a black diamond as the tale.
"Mrs. Raven, we are ready for the next attack." I heard a voice from behind me.
I was currently in a conference room in an army base. This is where I plan the attacks on Kristanna and her little family and friends. They really underestimate me. Of course only Kristanna knows about me but she doesn't know how powerful I am. I have practiced my powers for months. They may just be called abilities for other mermaids because they can't do the things I can but considering how amazing I am it's a power. Power that only I have. That only few know about.
All these humans that are doing what I say don't even know. All they know is mermaids exists and I know them well enough to know where they are.
"Hold the attack." I commanded without turning to face him.
I could feel him getting nervous. Everybody is when around me. They just can't help it. Being in my presence is intimidating and I am short tempered.
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