....uhmm i dont think anybody saw my post a week or two ago but basically I'm putting this book on pause. And to sum it up, literally the first like eight chapter was literally 13 yr old me who had just gotten into yaoi and hadn't really read any love stories and hadn't experienced love myself. Which is literally a newly teenager expensing inexperienced love. The more I go back to those chapter and try to edit them the less I like them and I've also forgotten what roles were assigned to who and lost what my story was about.
Did you know this whole story was supposed to be in Sasuke's point of view, I doubt it. I literally only focused on that little preteen love thing. And I hate it, I wanted them to have a more consistent personality. Naruto was literally supposed to be this like badass person who owns his shit the way he wants to, Sasuke was meant to be a person who is cold but has a SMALL soft spot for Naruto that grows into love, not right off the bat romantically gestures. And I honestly hate whenever character are overly OOC even if Naruto is more feminine or cross dresses should not drown on his personality. The only thing I kept the slightest bit consistent was Naruto and Sasuke's verbal tick or hum whatever you want to call them. This was like the second book I had posted when I first posted this book I had another one but this one became more popular. I ended up discontinuing that one too because I didn't know where I wanted to go with it, but it's just as bad as this was is, rushed, young, and not planned out. And I didn't even put out a notice just BOOM discontinued, and it's funny people are still reading it even if it's a little bit know that I appreciate it it makes me want to rewrite it.
Don't get me wrong the ideas were and are perfect it's just the fact I didn't output it the way I wanted to.
Anyway enough ranting this was no way of summing anything up at all. If anything this is more that what's on my feed.
But to close off this message I'm gonna say that I will come back to this book it's just the fact that I don't want to focus on repairing rewriting and fixing fonts. When I want to do more books and be inspired.....I have two other book and I would say they're way better than these two one a one shot it's sorta wonky wonky but that's what I was goin for. The other one is my first outlook on an omega verse. I also have another book that I probably won't publish until it completely finished. But look out for when I post it.
One more thing before I go all together I belive this story has.....16,687 word..if I did it right and that minus all the author notes
It was fun sharing milestones wi th you guys
Orochii out.
Bye my snakes
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FanficThis story is about Sasuke Uchiha a popular businessman reining over the famous Uchiha.Industry he inherited it from his parents. And heck if that doesn't justify it for you even his last name has wealth across the world you are not allowed to use t...
