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[COMPLETED] Venture into the misty Witchwood. Under the moonlight, the howling of wolves will accompany you into the embrace of the dark forest. Find out if you will find your way through the overgrown thicket and despite all the wrong paths. Who k...

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⚝ Best First Line ⚝ [WINNER ANNOUNCEMENT]

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*✩∘☽⚝☾∘ Best First Line ∘☽⚝☾∘✩*
Slots : 5/5
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Accepted Participants:
1. howabtastranger - The Wait / Chap: 1 
2. -poeticsun - Of stars and shadows / Chap 1 
3. ty-the-writer - In A Stranger's Bed 
4. ASQUAD_19 - Bated! / Chap. 1
5. lizziecrawford089 - Iridescent mate / Chap. 1

                            

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Judging Criterias:
Does the first line arouse curiosity/ excitement? (4 points) 
Does the first line fit the rest of the chapter/genre? (4 pts.) 
Interesting word choice/ stylistic device? (4 pts.)
Total: 12 Pt. 

                            

                                And here we have our winners of the category 'Best First Line'
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            

                            

                              
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And here we have our winners of the category 'Best First Line'


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⚝ 5th PLACE ⚝
Rating: bated by ASQUAD_19
Does the first line arouse curiosity/ excitement? (4 points) 1/4
Does the first line fit the rest of the chapter/genre? (4 pts.) 2/4
Interesting word choice/ stylistic device? (4 pts.) 0/4
Total: 3/12
Feedback: First, you can follow the plot and it is clear where the journey should go. Along the way, however, more attention should definitely be paid to grammar, comma placement, word choice, and sentence order. Changing the narrative perspective within the text also strongly disturbs the reading flow.
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