Chapter Five

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A/N. I just got some reviews, I just got some reviews, I just got some reviews, let's see who they're from!

"Listen, most people say they will not abandon their story, then the next thing you see? They haven't been uploaded for months! Yeah, I will still have my doubts.

Now Back to the story.

I think we need more of the back story, you should make a long chapter and keep it as a prologue, for better understanding.

I think the story was good, it would explain some topics in the future, but how would you be able to shape it? As is this Post PJO era or HOO era with different demigods or before it?

And now that Artemis is mortal, what happens to her hunt? Plus I am pretty sure Apollo will soon accompany Artemis cause no matter what, he would be willing to battle Fates for his sister.

Overall, it was a good chapter with minimal spelling mistakes, hope to see more soon ;)

KJ...

Peace Out!" -KyrptonWrites

Fair, but I haven't really abandoned anything, AND BEFORE ANY OF YOU BRING UP THAT BEYBLADE STORY AND THAT HUNGER GAMES CROSSOVER, I'M GOING TO UPDATE THOSE WHEN I FINISH RotDA AND OtSoD!

You thought that was the last chapter for the backstory? It isn't. I recently planned out what goes in what chapters, and let me tell you, I have past chapters lined up all the way to chapter 12. Four more past chapters! So yeah, not done. As for PJO, yeah, none of that exists in this, sorry. This is entirely AU.

Her Hunt is fine for now. Apollo isn't gonna show up till the end because he trusts Percy to do his job. But he is still watching over in his chariot. If something bad happens, he'll be there to back it up.

Thank you, here is more!

"another great chapter! keep it up man, i'm really interested in the story." -torukmaktoo

Thank you, I will!

"So, Artemis isn't the hardcore man-hater. Glad to hear it, some fanfics make her sound so delusional. Loving the story so far, keep it up!" -RagingFusion

Yeah, I see her more as a feminist than a misandrist. Because the only time she really harms men is when they're doing bad shit. The rest of her cruelty is just stuff most gods do... And she isn't above harming girls either.

"Another great one! I really like the jumps between the present day and the past, it's a cool trope that I feel is underrated." -PokemonAndPJOFanboy

Thank you! I like it too. It's a really interesting way to write a story, rather than just random flashbacks.

Alright, onto the story!

Chapter Five

     Apollo flashed out in a golden light as bright as the sun.

     Percy sighed and stood up, Time to go sleep in the woods.

     It wasn't hard to fall asleep in the wilderness. The sounds of the forest were relaxing in their own right, and mixing that with Artemis's blessing, it was the perfect concoction for sleeping in the woods.

     Percy had set himself up on a branch, laying his back against the trunk as he sat up. Years of experience in sleeping in this position ensured that he wouldn't fall out of the tree when he woke up.

     He stretched as best he could before standing up. He kept a hand on the trunk of the tree to steady himself. He jumped down, landing silently on the tips of his bare feet. He walked back into the temple.

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