Chapter Seven

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A/N. REVIEWS!

"I find it very amusing that his awareness of the world is similar to that of a toddler's. Totally approve of this chapter, I'm sure everyone is interested in his backstory. but other than receiving Artemis's blessing, I wonder what other abilities he possesses... I guess only time can tell.

I think you should try to describe things a bit more. The chapter is good, but it feels...rushed?

With that out of the way, I think this is a great chapter. Wish you a happy new year!" -RagingFusion

Thank you. I think it fits since he was only just created. He's like that in this chapter too, since you know, he's been in the woods for four thousand years.

The only other abilities he has is basically godly strength, reflexes, and durability. So... yeah. Everything else he has is Artemis related stuff.

Alright man. Let's see how I did in this chapter!

Thank you, happy New Year!

"While I'm not a fan of Guardian fics, especially this particular "All gods have a guardian" approach, this definitely shows some promise. Percy isn't reincarnated as he usually he is, which is overdramatic. No unnecessary hatred from any of the sides, as we normally see. Artemis and her hunters don't hate men. At least not to the usual extent.

I especially like how the story is divided into how Artemis and Percy (along with the Hunt) became friends, and the other on how they will start a relationship. We won't really have to wait a lot for it.

I am curious, why is Percy connected to the ocean? Is he a demigod of Poseidon? Also, Sally is in the story. I wonder what her role is?

Also, I believe the Big Three oath isn't in place? No prophecy? I certainly wouldn't mind an original plot." -Le Connoisseur

Well thank you. I like being the exception to things. Percy isn't connected to the ocean, he just likes it. Like me, I love the ocean, but I'm not connected to it. As for Sally, she's just a cameo. A thing for readers to point out like that one Leonardo DiCaoprio meme. (The one where he's sitting, then snaps his fingers, pointing at something offscreen?) Nope, no Big Three oath, no Great Prophecy. This is like, entirely AU. Only reason this is Percy Jackson fanfiction is because Percy is in it. (And the Gods too, if that counts) Anyways, hope you continue to enjoy!

"...Wait, so Orion is The Gigante? I thought he was Poseidon's son. Which one is it?

Also, the chapter was ~amazing. Will be waiting impatiently for more." -KryptonWrites

Both. It just depends on the myth/story. In the books, he's a Gigante, like in this story. Other stories, he's a son of Poseidon. (Fun fact, the giants Eplialtes and Otis, the gigantes who kidnapped Ares and trapped him in a jar, are sons of Poseidon in some myths too. As well as that story of Artemis jumping between them and them killing each other is one of their myths too!)

Thank you, hope you enjoy this one!

Also, sorry to everyone for this chapter taking forever. I actually had it done a week ago, but Zaeng_ has been really busy and we had technology problems. I had to have her read it on my laptop at school, and then screenshot the rest bit by bit and send it through Instagram. I actually finished two chapters, so zi'll post Chapter Eight in like a day or two, just to make sure no one misses a chapter!

Onto the chapter!

Chapter Seven

     "I might know someone who can make you immortal again."

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