Chapter Four

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"This is honestly a nice change from other story's. Keep it up" -Darth Kyuubi kurama

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"great chapter found this yesterday and love it so far" -Nightcat77

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"Cool concept, excited to see where it goes!" -PhatomFuryJP

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"Dang, I always adore Apollo, and I really like the dynamic he and his sister have. I also like that you have Apollo approve Percy's feelings towards Artemis, usually in stories like this he is ticked when he finds out about Percy and Artemis liking each other. Anyway, another fantastic chapter, you my friend are an amazing writer!"

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoy their dynamic. I think Apollo might make one more appearance, I'm not sure. I have it planned, but might cut it out if it doesn't fit. Yeah, I decided that he would be cool with it because Percy did swear to protect her. If he breaks that oath, he fades to nothing. (Cool little lore detail that I don't think will be mentioned in the story, so I'll put it here!) Anyways, I hope you continue to enjoy!

"Another great chapter as usual! Of course I'll keep reading, you certainly have a way to intrigue your readers, I'm impressed! Keep it up, and don't let anything stop you from doing your best!"

"Thank you! I'm glad you find this intriguing. I have a great (in my opinion) tale to tell, and I'm glad you're deciding to stick around! (That goes for everyone who continues to read my stories). I'm going to try to continue to do my best, though it may get hard sometimes.

"Zeus is such a horrible person, I hope someone humbles him" -Walter

Yeah, I wanted to truly show how fucked up he is. Sadly, just like the myths, nothing is going to happen to him. Honestly, I don't think he is even going to actually show up again.

"hmmm, interesting..." -KryptonWrites

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"Let's see whats here," -KryptonWrites

Hope you enjoy!

"...ohk? Did not get it." -KryptonWrites

Don't get what?

"Ok, this was good. Really good. I like what you have done to the story, like your old comments, the only good 'Guardian of the hunt' story was Everlasting Promises, well there are other good Pertemis stories Like 'Cradle Of Olympus' or 'The Legend Of The Son Of Poseidon. But the twisted way your story is, I like it. This will definitely be a good story, don't abandon it man." -KryptonWrites

Thanks man! I'm not going to abandon it, don't worry!

"Sooo good" -Levitico

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Chapter Four

     Perseus had a strong desire to go north. A really strong desire. Almost like a need.

     He set off in that direction.

     The woods were silent as he walked. There were no bugs, no rustling of leaves. The silence was broken by the leaves crunching under his feet.

     The farther he walked into the woods, the darker it got. Perseus wasn't afraid of the dark, but it definitely made it harder to see. As he kept on, the sounds of battle started to break the silence. He broke into a sprint.

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