FINAL THOUGHTS
Before we start, I want to answer the reviews. Also, I kinda forgot to answer the ones from the last chapter before posting the epilogue, so whoops. I'll answer them here.
"Styx can go to hell" -Velin63
She does kind of live there, so...
"Right in the feels man. Great story and can't wait till your next one!" -GonkDroid3000
Thanks man! I'm glad you liked it. I'll look out for you on whatever's next!
"If you're gonna write Pertemis next time please...please make it a happy ending... please" -Jarie
It probably will be. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
"I hope that Artemis gets her revenge on styx for what she did and I like how you did this story very well done" -Ryan Fowler
I don't think she will. She'll just live as she had before, now with the memory of love with her.
"Well, it was a kick in the balls from behind, no doubt. But surprisingly well managed, of course I'd have preferred a happy ending but a nicely craftee bittersweet one isn't half bad. However I wished we could have seen the hunters hang out a bit more with Percy and Artemis" -8MexicanJaeger
Thanks man. I really hoped that the ending would have an impact, and the general consensus is that it did. I love a good happy ending, but sometimes, that just isn't what life doles out. Yeah, I feel like if I showed that more, it might have made their deaths more impactful and really driven home the point of Artemis losing almost everyone.
"ow, whys the snot out of her nose? Also what's the next idea for your next story? Not gonna lie, I really expected it to be a long fic, though it's good. Also if you want some ideas for the next Percy fic then you can ask me!" -KryptonWrites
Have you ever cried hard dude? Snot leaks out of your nose like a damn waterfall lol. As for the length of this story, I have to say it's actually one of my longer ones. As someone who started with one shots, then graduated to multi-chapter fics, I think this is good improvement. Most of my stories (multi chaps) are about fifteen chapters long. The word count of this one is like, ranked third longest, at 51K words.
As for ideas for my next story, I have a lot of them. I have one where Percy is a cowboy in the Wild West, one were he's a retired hitman a la John Wick, one where he's in an arranged marriage with Artemis while also having dueled the Devil and becoming the king of Hell by an ancient Law. I have too many ideas lmao. I'm probably gonna (try) finish my WIPs. I have four right now.
"Why should Dennis be a mortal? He was part of Artemis, when she has been made god again. So he should received godhood too, no?" -Enias
The same way that demigods born from Goddesses aren't immortal. I don't think it really works that way. If a demigod is the cells from the Goddess, they should also be immortal as they are part of her body. My advice, don't think about it too hard, a lot of stuff crumbles lmao.
Now onto reviews from the epilogue.
"sad but fitting" -Hello1894
The nature of a tragedy.
"Awwww! That was cute! Well, hopefully you start on a new story soon!" -KryptonWrites
Thank you. Like I mentioned before, I'm going to try and focus on my WIP's now. Namely Return of the Disgraced Archangel and On the Seas of Destiny.
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