Chapter 4

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The next day
[The day started normally with everyone having breakfast, and getting ready for the day. After two hours, they saw the Telmarine army marching toward them, and the soldiers came up with a plan. Susan and Lucy would go in search of Aslan, and Peter would battle Miraz to give them time. Edmund went to deliver the scroll alongside a giant and Glenstorm. Miraz accepted the duel and Edmund left with the others]
{Back with the Narnians}
[Peter got ready for the duel, he chose his seconds, which would be Edmund, and the bear, and then he leaves the Telmarine camp with the others. Everyone leaves the cave except for Caspian]
{With Caspian, Susan, and Lucy}

(Caspian slightly laughs)
{With Peter and the army}
(Peter starts his duel with Miraz)
{With Susan and Lucy}

Susan: Thank you
Caspian: You're welcome, your highness, I wanted to follow you just in case you ran into trouble
Susan: Great timing, how's Peter doing?
Caspian: So far so good
Susan: That's good news
Caspian: I want to apologize for saying that my first mistake was calling you and your siblings. It was the best thing I did
Susan: You were upset, I get it, you had just found out a terrible truth, and Peter didn't make it any easier
Caspian: It was still wrong and I almost made everything worse by almost releasing the white witch
Susan: It wasn't your fault, you were tricked by Nikabrik, and again, you had just gone through something painful. We had just lost a battle, Peter and you were losing hope, and Jadis is a manipulative devil. I don't blame either of you and this wasn't anyone's fault
Caspian: The hatred and disappointment in your eyes is something that I never want to see again when you look at me
Susan: I don't hate you and yes, you and Peter did disappoint me yesterday, but everyone makes mistakes. Nobody's perfect, we're human, it's perfectly normal to make mistakes, and if my forgiveness puts your mind at ease then I forgive you. Let's just put this behind us, alright
Caspian: I'd like that
(Susan kisses his cheek and nuzzles it with the tip of her nose making her and Caspian slightly blush)
{On the battlefield}
[Peter defeats Miraz and calls for Caspian to do what he needs to do. Caspian grabs the sword but in the end, he spares his life, and Caspian had tears in his eyes. Caspian then told Miraz to keep his life but that he would give back the Narnians their kingdom. All the Narnians cheered for him, Caspian turned around and looked up. Susan smiled at him, and he smiled back, but then Lord Sopespian helped Miraz up and stabbed him with one of Susan's arrows killing him. Lord Sopespian tried to frame Susan but none of the Narnians believed him. General Glozelle commands the Telmarine army and everyone gets ready. The war continues, and Caspian goes inside the cave to lead the Narnian army. As they're making their way to the battle, Peter and Caspian count to ten, and once they reach ten, the columns of the cave are knocked over. Many of the Telmarine soldiers and their horses fall in the pit and Susan commands the archers, and they shoot their arrows at the pit with the Telmarine soldiers in it killing them all. The other Narnian soldiers and Caspian come out from the back and attack the Telmarines from behind]

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