Editing Overhaul - Must Read

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Hi, How are you guys? 

I've been debating whether to do this or not, but ultimately decided that It's for the best, especially now that the story has gotten so long and detailed.

I will start editing, organizing, and correcting some information very soon. 

But first, I wanted to explain some things, I also wanted to change some details that work in favor of my finalized vision of the characters and plot.

I'll add any other characters you guys want to hear about as well.

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Trixie (F, 21) (DOB-July 4th) ~ Mother is missing (dead? idk yet) Placed in foster care with little brother Trent. She did not stay in foster care and was categorized as a Runaway. Has DiD, C-PTSD and hates her stepfather, con-man, Peter. Has traumatic memories of her mother and stepfather being drug addicts and another man who isn't Peter sexually abusing her and her brother in exchange for drugs.

She has a convoluted memory of setting her childhood home on fire, but truly isn't sure what happened. She likes to believe her mother and father are dead. 

She graduated from a poor high school with passable grades while being homeless. For a time, she slept under a bridge or in the school buses on the school property. 

Gloria found her at age 17 in a club, where she recruited her to work at the Dollhouse in exchange for being able to sleep there. She never got her high school diploma because she had nowhere to send it, and instead worked on the night of her graduation.

Generally, when Trixie is completely out of headspace she's destructive and emotionally unstable, and is desperate to stay in some headspace. Regression and Submission is her form of self-medication.

She likes to feel protected, sex, soft fleece, plush toys, music, dancing, and pink.

She dislikes most men, being alone, being out of headspace, red Gatorade, and being ignored.

Her triggers are unknown and random, she has not been mentally evaluated properly, only when she was sent to a mental hospital by the state to keep her from running away.

Technically, she is obsessed with Telmont, though she keeps it to herself.


Telmont (G!P, 29) (DOB- June 1st) ~ Current head of Telmont Industries, a medical billing and supply company. They buy debt from hospitals and rehab centers and sell vital medical equipment, as well as bespoke pieces of equipment, giving them exclusive partnerships all over the world with many prestigious hospitals. 

Under that business, there is a trafficking organization that moves illegal and legal drugs, guns, equipment, cars, animals, and more, but NOT PEOPLE. 

Telmont loves women and work. Despite her status, she requited The Dollhouse after noticing it's 'Dolls' enjoyed the work they did. Most of the 'Dolls' working in the dollhouse enjoyed when she came around, which was regularly. Her first 'Doll' was Kris, who she still keeps in contact with and is very appreciative towards. 

Telmont has a Korean Father and a Black Mother, and two sisters. Kani Telmont is the only one mentioned. 

Telmont is covered in tattoos that represent memories and lost Family members. She is very Business oriented and sex is her way of decompressing.  

She loves Women but has been with men. She likes feminine men and finds sleeping with as masculine man to be perverted.  She doesn't like when people touch her things, she is usually very Stoic and rigid in her way of working. She kills without remorse or hesitation, and often runs the water operations of the Telmont family. 

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