Hello everyone! It certainly has been awhile huh, So the good news is I'm not scrapping or postponing this story or anything of the sort. Instead, I've been thinking of actually REDOING the story cause, well, if you have a decent bit of maturity and intelligence(most certainly not me) you would see that this story is kinda lackluster and too one-sided like in the beginning of chapter 5, To me, it feels like there is no Personality and life in these characters or diversity or well anything in a human being it's just plain old 'make the plot go through' *cough* RWBY *cough* oh and the Prologue is really cringe and confusing, that too of course. So all and all I wanna re-imagine the story to make it, well a good story also cause I'm not happy with how I did it(Like seriously why the hell did I decide to throw in a random character out of nowhere and then kill him off in the same damn chapter like he meant anything???) but that's pretty much it
As to why I have not been updating my stories (I'm not being held at gunpoint by team JTSM I swear) It's mainly because of procrastination and.. Procrastination really, I was gonna write a Halloween special for team JTSM and TBOTF aswell as a Christmas one too, seriously I was, but procrastination and writers block is a genuine pain
And that's about it, PLEASE READ TEAM JTSM! I'm genuinely super proud of how I wrote it(definitely didn't steal RWBY's script and copy pasted for most parts) but seriously I'm proud of how I'm writing the story and plan to add the teams own lore for the story after RWBY's whole story is done, So please give it a read as I try and Re-imagine TBOTF :')
Peace! for now
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The beginning of the fog
HorrorA zombie apocalypse type of setting that I thought of while playing Back4blood (check it out! the game I mean but this story is cool too) hope you have fun reading and I'll make sure to keep giving to the community :) and I will work on the story as...
