Funny story of how I got here: after being told the original scene is already spicy enough and there's no way I could make it spicier, I wrote this to prove said person wrong🤣
The more I read it, the more I wonder if this is what I should've included in the original👁️👁️
════════════════════════════"The carriage will be ready in a few minutes," he said, leaving the room. As soon as the door clicked shut, Xavier approached the maiden. She averted her eyes, shying away from his gaze.
"Madelaine, won't you look at me?"
"I fear I will be feverish if I do – Xavier!" she exclaimed, with a hand on her cheek. "Do not tease me. You know I don't tolerate it when you do."
He leaned in, hovering above her lips.
"Then, what do you wish I do?"
Her face flamed with red, and she stepped away from him.
"We'll be late if we stay here," she said softly. Holding her wrist, Xavier pulled her flush against his chest. Still, she resisted, not looking at him.
"Madelaine, look at me," he breathed, gently holding her chin. She followed his hand, gazing into his eyes.
"Oh my, what an inviting expression." Biting his lip, it took all his willpower to stop his hands from roaming past her waist. The blush on her face and the spark growing in her eyes lured his desires.
Her sweet scent pulled him closer, leaning to capture her lips into a deep kiss. Madelaine, felt her temperature soar, feeling his lips moving on hers, tongue mixing in a battle of dominance.
She was growing hotter, overwhelmed with the passion he sucked from her mouth. All she could do, was hold onto his cloak, until he pulled away, breathing hot breaths in her proximity. Her head felt light, dazed from his kiss and he noted how she stumbled against him.
She kept her eyes riveted on him, lips wet and swollen from their intimacy. He felt a throb and bit his lip, fighting his ever-growing lust.
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