How to Write Fiction

The Most Common Mistake with Commas

I could write a book on commas alone, but today I am only going to discuss one common error that I see in fiction writing.

COMMAS AND CONJUNCTIONS

Only use a comma with a conjunction (and, but, or, etc.) if you are separating two independent clauses. An independent clause is a complete thought--it could be a complete sentence if it stands alone.

Correct:

I like broccoli, but I prefer green beans.

Notice the two complete thoughts:

I like broccoli .

I prefer green beans.

Correct:

I like broccoli but prefer green beans.

Notice 1 independent clause followed by a dependent one, so no comma.

Incorrect:

I like broccoli, but prefer green beans.

Somehow a rumor got started that you always use a comma before a conjunction. This is a LIE!

Here are some more examples:

It was time to go home, but she didn't want to leave.

She didn't have enough money, so the group pitched in to buy her ticket.

The boy was considered a genius, yet he didn't know who Beyonce was.

The only time this rule does not apply is when clauses are very brief and very closely associated.

Examples:

Katie chopped the vegetables and Bill cooked.

Momma sang alto and Daddy sang bass.

Put the ring on her finger and repeat after me.

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