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Hey there, guys. Thanks for reading this story, and thanks for voting, too. I appreciate it, Shay (since, till now, is the girl that voted for the two chaps).

This wasn't difficult to come up with. The thing that made me get stuck once in a while is figuring out how to correctly express the emotions from the characters. Because I've never experienced loss from a loved one, or betrayment, or false hope in an intense way to the point where characters are regretful and hateful. I have never suffered the after effects towards that category.

So I feel like in some parts, I didn't do them justice. If I didn't, then I'm sorry and maybe I'll gain some more understanding in the future.

The cheating part is foreign for me to write about, so if I didn't do that correctly, or didn't meet the standards of you guys, then I'm sorry. Maybe I'll read more POV of cheating characters?

But yeah, thanks for reading this. It's all up to you guys to know what happens next. If he confessess, if he goes to the funeral, if Lillian will ever forgive, how he's going to cope with Annie's death, how he's gonna handle the "other girl"...just a bunch load of things, really.

You guys can figure that out. But if you wanna know, you can message me and I'll tell you without a problem.

Thanks for reading, and vote if you want. I'd appreciate that. Good day, and try to be the happiness that you wish someone else gave you.

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