Chapter 1 (rewritten)

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So, I decided to rewrite some chapters because they were short and boring.  I will rewrite all the way to... chapter 7, I think. Yeah, thats it. Enjoy the rewritten version of chapter 1. 

I sorry I didnt update lately.

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Nobody's POV:

He gazed through the snowy forest. He wished he knew that there was a blizzard raging at this time. But no, he still wanted to check the surroundings. He absolutely hated the cold. But what he also doesn't know is that he is walking straight into Soviet territory. If he knew he was, he would've never walked there. But it is the best 'choice' he made. ''If I don't find back to the base, I will die out here.'' He growled. The man walking through the snowy night was the Third Reich. The representation of his country. He stopped as he heard a branch crack behind him. ''Am I in Soviet territory...?'' He asked himself while looking back to see. A loud noise filled the night, and he felt a sharp and strong pain go through his calf. ''FUCK WE MISSED!'' He heard behind him. He wanted to run, but instead, he fell straight into the snow. The footsteps behind him got closer and closer. He got up, looked behind, and ran for his life. The pain in his calf got worse, but he couldn't care about that. He found a good hiding spot behind a tree and hid there. The footsteps stopped right next to the tree he was. ''Shit, we lost him...'' He heard one of them say. ''USSR will kill us if we don't bring him with us.'' The other groaned. It was two people. Reich looked at his calf to see a bleeding wound from the gunshot. He hissed but quickly put his hand on his mouth. ''What was that?'' One of the asked. ''I don't know Ivan...maybe it was the Third Reich.'' The other answered. All of a sudden Reich felt something grab him and pull him out of his hiding spot. ''Found him.'' The person holding him said. ''Good let's go back to the car.'' The other said.

Reich was thrown into the car. They both thought he was unconscious but he wasn't. So Reich had to listen to them making dirty jokes about him and Soviet. ''Imagine how Reich would suffer under USSR's control.'' One of them said. ''Yeah he would mostly be tortured. They are enemies after all...'' the other agreed. ''I'll get out somehow.'' Reich hissed. The both looked behind to see Reich sitting in a dark corner glancing at them. ''You're awake?-'' ''Isaak, don't talk to him!'' The other snapped at Isaak. ''I had to listen to your terrible jokes. That was enough. I don't want to hear your voices.'' Reich snapped at them. Isaak looked at Ivan and burst out laughing. ''You heard that? Well I hope it's true.'' Ivan said amused. Reich felt blood rush into his cheeks. 'Am I blushing?' He thought. ''Are you blushing?'' Isaak asked Reich. ''N- no! Why would I? I hate Soviet.'' Reich said looking to the side and getting even redder. ''Well you call him Soviet which is his nickname for friends. Friends call him Soviet.'' Ivan explained. ''So you still like him.'' Isaak summed up. Reich was already so red that he couldn't get redder but that changed at the topic of Soviet. Reich huffed and didn't get bothered by them anymore and just ignored them.

After a while, Reich was yanked out of the car. ''Wh-'' but he shut up as he saw the huge mansion of the glory USSR. Reichs eyes widend and he had to stay silent. And he wanted to stay silent. He was brought into the house and looked around first. He feared Soviet. Reich didn't even do anything, but Soviet wouldn't believe him. After everything he has done. No one would forgive that. ''How can I help you?'' Someone asked the two soldiers. ''We want to see USSR. We have something to show him.'' Isaak said slightly annoyed. The person nodded and lead them to his office. The two knocked and waited for Soviet to answer. ''Come in!'' Was heard from behind the door. The two stepped in with Reich behind them. ''Oh you two...what is it?'' Soviet asked them. ''We have something important for you.'' Ivan said slightly chuckling. They both stepped to the side to reveal Reich. Reichs eyes widend and he started shaking.

Third Reich POV:

'If I now make a wrong move, I will end up with a bullet in my head.' I thought looking at Soviet. ''You two can go...'' Soviet said slightly impressed. The two did as he said, and I was left alone with him. I'm so dead. I looked back to Soviet who was standing at a shelf, waving me over to him. I gulped and slowly walked over to him. As I was in front of him, he pulled me up to him, and I started trembling. ''What happened with you?'' He asked softly. I was shocked but tried not to show it. ''F- fuck...'' that was when I broke. Everything that happened for the past few months. It all was coming up again. I tried to forget it, but now...? My legs gave in and I fell right into Soviets arms. ''What happend dear?'' He asked again. I was unable to answer and started crying. ''I'm here now...I'm here for you'' He whispered, and gently picked me up. ''Why are you s- so nice?'' I asked him carefully. He chuckled and looked down at me. ''Spies. They told me that you were forced.'' He said and carried me somewhere. ''R- really? I thought you hated m- me...'' I said confused. ''That was the past, but I have forgiven you.'' He whispered and opened a door. The room we were in seemed to be his bedroom. ''Your calf is bleeding...'' He whispered. He directed me to sit on the bed and I did that.

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It kinda hurts to see my first chapter get remade like this. But I'm still happy I made it. So I'll see what I'm gonna do with chapter 2... the storyline has to line up at chapter 7-8 after all.

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