Hi. So I was looking over this and I actually like the story. The writing isn't the best but I have definitely written worse so rather than rewrite it, I plan to continue from where I was at with no recollection of what I was planning. So. I'll try to use this as a way to get my daily word count again when I can. I think from now I want to elaborate more on Miriam and Rhodes for a chapter or two and then expand the elemental's powers more before I introduce the "top of the pyramid" uniting.
And, who knows, maybe I have gotten better at writing and I'll write a more investing story.
That's all. I am still definitely working on Untitled but I have once again found I enjoy this story.
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Tyrant in the Shadows
FantasyHere lies a world of pain, a world where the potentials and shadows constantly war. Everyone knows the shadows come from an evil king. Everyone knows that the potentials are practically unstoppable. What no one knows is the true evil lies in a very...
