Suprisingly good for you (os)

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(This one is based off of the song "Surprisingly good for you" from Patti Lupone's Evita. It's a Human AU. See my human AU chapter for character info, however some is different: Lisa Duvviry (blue) is a singer visiting a Homeworld army camp to entertain the soldiers. Yellow (Patrice or Patti Diamond) is the general of the battalion. Her and  Lisa noticed each other when Lisa was on stage and Patti was in the audience. They struck up a conversation and soon became attracted to one another. After several interactions they met in the night and acted on their attraction. At this point in the story it's been a two days sleeping together. They have to be secretive given their status's. But Lisa longs to be more than Patti's mistress.
Scene {One of the battles between organics and the Homeworld soldiers for colonization. In Patti's tent. It's about one in the morning; the tent is lit with a lantern with a burning candle. They lye on Patti's bed, her top being absent, Lisa's full attire lies on the floor.}

Lisa props herself up on her elbow. Being the first one to speak since their sex a few minutes earlier.
(This is where the song lyrics kick in, you could imagine them singing this or just talking regularly)
L: Patrice Diamond
P: Lisa Duvviry
Both: I've heard so much about you

Both overlap:
{L: I'm amazed, for I'm only a musician
P: I'm amazed, for I'm only a soldier

L: Nothing to shout about , only a girl on the air.
P: One of the thousands, Defending the country she loves}

L: But when you fight, the things you do affect us all *she runs her hand over Patti's forearm*

P: But when you sing, you take us away from the squalor of the real world (being the battles and all) *she places her hand atop Lisa's* ...are you here on your own?

L: Yes-

P: So am I, what a fortunate coincidence.
Maybe you're my reward for my efforts here tonight *she sits up and winks at Lisa*

L: It seems crazy but you must believe
There's nothing calculated, nothing planned.
Please forgive me if I seem naive,
I would never want to force your hand
But please understand, *she sits up fully, pulling her hand away, and looks away bashfully* I'd be good for you.
I don't always rush in like this.
Twenty seconds after saying hello; *she fiddles with her nails*
Telling strangers I'm too good to miss.
If I'm wrong I hope you'll tell me so- *she looks back at Patti*
But you really should know, I'd be good for you; I'd be surprisingly good for you.
*Patrice sits staring at Lisa without a word*
*Hastily Lisa continues* I won't go on if I'm boring you. But...do you understand my point of view?
Do you like what you hear, what you see, and would you be, good for me too? *she rushes out*
*Patti lifts up her hand and cups the side of Lisa's face, pulling her in slightly for a kiss before Lisa pulls away.*
I'm not talking of a hurried night
A frantic tumble then a shy goodbye *she looks back*
Creeping home before it gets too light
That's not the reason that I caught your eye *she sits up and sits on her knees facing Patti. Cupping her lovers face with both of her hands under her jawline. Lightly turning her head upwards to look at her.
Which has to imply, I'd be good for you *she bends down and lightly presses her lips against the others.*
I'd be good for you.
{Sax solo} 😎
Patti grabs the back of Lisa's head holding her there. They make out lovingly. Lisa cupping Patti's face; and her, one hand cradling Lisa's head, the other on Lisa's hip.

P: Please go on, you enthrall me
I can understand you perfectly
And I like what I hear, what I see, and knowing me. I would be good for you too

L: I'm not talking of a hurried night
A frantic tumble then a shy goodbye
Creeping home before it gets too light
That's not the reason that I caught your eye
Which has to imply, I'd be good for you
I'd be surprisingly good for you *she smiles against Patti's lips.*
(End song lyrics)

(Comment any other songs that fit them that you think I should do this kind of thing to.)
-JR :)

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