At Bhishma's chamber
Solider - hail to mahamahim, angaraj karna is seeking your permission for entering the room.
Bhishma - ask him to come in
Karna enters
Karna - Pranipat mahamahim
Bhishma - putra....when grandson calls his grandfather as Mahamahim rather than pitamah, it feels worse to me please call me pitamah.
Karna - pitamah, how do that I'm Rajamata kunti's son.
Bhishma - likewise how you are suryadev's son, I'm gangapur Bhishm.
Karna - pitamah, I have to tell you one important matter.
Bhishma - before that, I've one question, can I ask it ??
Karna - yes pitamah, you don't need to ask permission.
Bhishma - putra, what is your past ??? Why does your sister hate your presence ??? Who has adopted you ?? Don't say that Radha and Adhirath.
Karna - pi..ta..maha (said with teary eyes)
Bhishma - i know who adopted you both that is none other our gurudev parashuram. But why does Bhargavi hate your presence ??
Karna - pitamah.. please I'll tell you when the time has arrived. But I want to tell the conspiracy against Pandavas.
Bhishma - what conspiracy ???
Karna told Bhishma, what he had heard about the conspiracy.
Bhishma - I'll kill that Shakuni
Karna - pitamah wait... I have a plan
Bhishma - what plan dear ???
Karna - why don't you talk like this with Maharaj Dhritarashtra ??? (The plan will be revealed later)
At Kashi
Author's POV
Last chapter I asked Vrishali's mother name but Melody389 said that it is not mentioned in Mahabharata. So I'm keeping an imaginary name for her that is Maharani chandrabagha and Maharaj Vikram.
POV ends
At Chandrabagha's chamber
Chandrabagha - putri we are organising a swayamvar for you in two months.
Vrishali - mata..I'm not interested in marriage... please try to understand my situation.
Chandrabagha - why putri ??? We have to fullfill our responsibility.
Vrishali - mata, am I responsibility to you ???
Chandrabagha - not like that putri....
Vrishali - then...
Chandrabagha - It's your father's order, you have to follow it (said Sternly)
Chandrabagha left the room.
Vrishali eyes was teary hearing the news of swamwar.
Vrishali's POV
What did I do ??? Why did they keep my swayamwar without my consent. Is this fair naryan ? No...my swayamwar will not happen. I've made my decision and I'll follow it, nobody will dare to stop me !
At Hastinapur
Dhritarashtra's chamber
Solider - hail to Maharaj Dritarashtra, mahamhim Bhishma is seeking your permission for entering the room.
Dritarashtra - ask tatashree to come in.
Mahamhim Bhishma enteres
Dritarashtra - Pranipat tatashree !
Bhishma - ayushmanbhava putra
Dritarashtra - tatashree may I know what you want me to do ?
Bhishma - putra, I'm telling these words from my experience, you should send Duryodhan with yudhishthir for tax collection and yagna because in Duryodhan's horoscope there is a problem so if he perform that yagna in varnavat, that problem will vanish.
Dritarashtra - as you say tatashree, I'll send Duryodhan with yudhishthir.
Bhishma nodes and exits
Bhishma's POV
Karna has suffered a lot in his life. For no mistake he is suffering a great loss, how can gurudev do this injustice to him. I can't remember the terrible past of his and I can't even reveal it to Bhagu. What should I do ??
Suddenly he felt a hand on his feet
Bhagu - Pranipat mahamahim
Bhishma - Kalyan ho putri
Bhagu - mahamahim...I've one request
Bhishma - it's my duty dear to fullfill your wish...you don't need to request me.
Bhagu - mahamhim..can...I call...you pitamah pleaseeeeee !
Bhishma eyes were teary hearing her request.
Bhishma - putri... (Said with teary voice)
Bhagu - it's fine mahamhim...
Before she could complete her sentence, her voice was broken by Bhishma.
Bhishma - I called you putri then you don't need to seek permission for calling me pitamah.
Bhagu - thanks pitamah, I'll take your leave pitamah
Bhishma - sure putri
Bhagu - Pranipat
At Pandavas chamber
Bhagu - Yudhishthir, yudhishthir, I've an order for.....
Before she could complete the sentence, she received a death glare from someone.
To be continued
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I got a new idea for a new story. It is a fanfiction story on Mahabharata. In that story Dushlya is main character also main lead. There are four main leads those are vrisha, vrishali, Dushlya and Jayadrath. So, first Jayadrath will be enemy of these three and the story revolves around them.
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