Results---General Fiction (Batch 2)

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Judge: Hecares1

Raven and Rue by ella_rowan

Title: 10/10

The title matches perfectly with the storyline, so I awarded the full marks.

Blurb: 20/20

Good written blurb, that fits the genre so well. Good job.

Cover: 20/20

Beautifully designed cover. It fits the genre nicely.

Characters: 18/20

I love the characters. They were great. They had their own weaknesses and flaws. Imperfect characters. Exactly what I wanted. But I felt you could have just used their names instead of Pip’s mother, Pip’s father; it was getting a little repetitive. I would have given many comments, as some statements really intrigued me and I wanted to either applaud, or add my suggestion, but I’m on a deadline, and I barely have time, that’s why there weren’t many comments.

Grammar and vocabulary: 20/20

Great word choice. Brava!

Overall enjoyment: 10/10

Enjoyed this one!

Total: 98/100

The Assassin’s Scar by Mariya_Evans

Title: 10/10

Nice title. It didn’t reflect in the chapters I read, but I’m sure it would in the upcoming chapters!

Blurb: 20/20

Perfectly written, and very intriguing. Will hook any reader looking for this genre to read.

Cover: 20/20

Beautiful cover!

Characters: 20/20

Love, love the characters. They were beautifully described. I’d have given many many comments, but unfortunately, time isn’t on my side, and although I read oline, I couldn’t really comment because of time.

Grammar and vocabulary: 20/20

I noticed one or two errors, but they weren’t even noticeable, and it will be so unfair to deduct after so much hard work. I can tell when a lot of work has been invested in a book and this book is one! I pointed one or so.

Overall enjoyment: Totally enjoyed this one!
Brava!

Total: 100/100




Land of the Unknown by
CrysTravel2019

Title: 10/10

The title matched perfectly with the storyline. Right from the very start, the title revealed itself in the book, which was very excellent. You nailed that. Well done.

Blurb: 17/20

The blurb is a bit of a mystery. The character mentioned in the blurb never appeared in the first four chapters of the book, so I’m wondering about that. I don’t know whether he’s going to appear in the latter part, but at least the main characters should be in the blurb. Who is Emiliano Quinteras? Still wondering. Well, I guess the only way to find out is to continue reading. Otherwise, the blurb is nice.

Cover: 20/20

The cover is beautiful and depicts the tone of the book so well. Well done.

Characters: 20/20

Love all the characters. They were vividly described. They had their own flaws, strength, and weakness. Well done! Brava!

Grammar and vocabulary: 19/20

A few errors that can easily be dealt with during a second edit.

Overall Expression: 10/10

Totally enjoyed this one. You’re a great story teller. I’d love to see it as a movie!

Total: 96/100

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