Silly things I removed from the story
I completely revamped some things early on but these are in the original order of how it was originally meant to be.
"Okay so that makes things more difficult for us. Reminder if you do anything I have a super soaker and the guards have guns."
"Wow, gee golly thank you for that friendly reminder!"
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That free time was shorter than Sonder(they're short. Just flys everywhere to hide it)
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Flashback of young Jasper fishing for fish. I don't know fishing terminology so reel, fishing line, fish, oversized parasitic goldfish, pond, worm, hook, wet fly knot, i have no idea what I'm doing or why I decided to include this
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"Do you really think that bullet was meant for you, dear test subject"
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"What if you eat 6.48 trillion bananas, how about that"
"It is unwise to consume that quantity of bananas, do not eat that many." Intervened the protogen.
"Aw, the little pussy's not happy" ignoring the protogen
"Stfu you look like a roblox cosplay tiktoker"
"At least I don't look like a 8 year olds fursona"
"It's better than getting paid less than the Ontario minimum wage"
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How's he struggling in water he can stand in, fr twinning jayfeather.//
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"Note: avoid water. Water bad."
Jasper opened his eyes, taking in the boring grey room he supposed to be in. He got up feeling less than mid.
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("I'm gonna comedically walk into a chair because I have an excuse!"-Sonder probably)
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"OH. I just had a verry good nap then"
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The guard faced the flashlight towards the doorway, surprisingly a subject was still in the room, albeit face planted on the floor.
"I- okay then." They swiped a special card against the button and the door slowly began closing.
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"Nuh uh uhh, I was not trained for this!! I don't even have a gun and I'm terrible at combat, honestly should have been a janitor but than my pay wouldn't be that good."
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"Hiii!- dang that's rough."
"AAAA- never noticed!! Perhaps cause there's a SHELF on me!!"
".. yeah probably."
"Ow, this is pain"
"Dumb ways to diee.. so many dumb ways to die."
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The air seemed quiet and stale. He spotted a flashlight and held it, déjà vu.
He proceeded down the hallway and saw no one one, only a beeping computer; screen showing a timer.
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He ran towards it but it just stretched further away.
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Jasper looked behind him, only the void looked back. Large and hungry, empty and deceiving, watching and whispering.
"Nope, time to wake up!" Jasper affirmed and spun in place. "That usually works.. even trying to leave as if it's a roblox game doesn't work- stay calm, I'm just in my containment sitting on the cat castle. If I'm lucky I'm actually in my own bed and-" He was noticeably panicked by now. "Im a human, he's still alive. Stop being optimistic. I'll die down in this stinky building."
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The voices became louder
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Did you accidentally leave the stove on?
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I WOKE UP IN A NEW BUGATTI
Sthu
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Time is limited
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Escape is futile
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One of us
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He got up and ran towards to computer again.
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You should make a cult for me
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The alarm blared, this only meant one thing. The microwave had finished.
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Sonder sat by the cafeteria waiting for the day to start. This is how it went most days. Wake up, wait, test, sleep, repeat, wait, wait, wait. Waiting for a change that would probably never come. Days blended together, memory forgetting seemingly unimportant things. Gazing at poorly drawn pictures of stars, knowing how matter how close they looked they were just.. so.. so far away. Ensuring heat and light from lengths away, stars could have died eons ago yet the light would still travel. How insignificant it all was. Time is a funny thing, through out all of humanity we looked to the stars, hoping there might be any other life. Yet nothing, utterly and probably, alone.
If someone looked the moon, how many more did the same thing? The same action shared by diverse individuals, who will never know of each other's existence. Yet influenced by the smallest effect.
They waved around their paw, noting how dreamlike it felt right now, not quite awake yet far from sleep. They've been visited by this feeling many times before. Familiar with its coming and goings.
Sonder would ponder relevance, everyone was so unbelievably small compared to the vast universe, so unnoticed. Yet when a inconvenience weaselled it's way in everyone acted like it was the end of the world. The small baffled yet so easily distracted by even smaller.
If ignorance is bliss. Does false ignorance have the safe affect?
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"Y'all better get back in your cells before I decide to turn this place into a saloon at high noon."
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"Shimmy shimm-"
"Shut up."
"Yay shimmy yah-"
"There is literally a body right in front of us Sonder! Not the time!"
"Swalala😔"
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The solum guard watched as food fight escalated. "I quit." They shortly turned into a hazzy. I guess no one can just quit laminax without consequences.
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"Dr.403, do your job and preform this test."
"No. These gootraxians have human thoughts, human opinions, and yet you want me to do this test? The fact they are no longer human immediately takes away all-"
"If you won't do your job, I will!"
"No, you won't." Each decently ranked scientist had a weapon of self protection against rouge subjects. They didn't expect a rouge scientist.
"You really going to shoot me over some goopy dogs?"
"Yeah. I am."
"Nuh uh. You don't have the balls."
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Jasper stared at 72. "This is why no one likes you. You look like a deformed minion popsicle."
"Jasper, this is why your dad left."
"😕"
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Diversion started playing the boombox, dancing along with the captivating music of ghost and pals.
The lightened crystals seemed to thrum with the beat. A small pup danced along with the nightshade. Diversions ears pricked up as he heard a human approach, they were always so lucky to meet him rather than all the other hostiles. A tired janitor stared at the party occurring, they eventually joined in the dance.
"Time to live up to my namesake."
What's the point of a boombox is not to lure your victims?
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The next chapter are the original ones before I started to 'rework' them, O stands for original. As you can see I never got very far.
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Melting Tide
FanfictionI started writing this a few years back but never could figure out how to continue the plot. It is unfinished and due to leaving the community will probably never be finished. I would like if someone read what younger me spent so long 'perfecting'...
